When I told you I wouldn't mind if you went to sleep, I really wanted you to stay.
I'm writing because I miss you and I wish I were with you right now laughing with you while we play under the covers.You make me smile oh so much, and I love every minute of it.
I know we fight, and I know sometimes you can't stand me but you still say "I love you baby" . Excitement meant going to a movie But then I fell in love with you; My mall. You, the thought of seeing you, your touch. I miss hearing your voice before I went to sleep, I wish you were closer.Every day it seems like you're going so far away I think you look adorable in your hats that you wear, I love it all. I love that your tall, even harder for me kiss you.I love how you tease me, I love how I tease you and get you so worked up.Youre my life, my everything,the only thing I could want. I love you
I wrote this poem last night.
I know it's all tegether but I'll fix it.
2007-07-06 08:41:29 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
no
2007-07-06 09:01:57 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wouldn't, you could really scare the heck out of him with all the intensity, sometimes it's fun to write that stuff to get it out, and I have got several letters never sent and poems never delivered and I am so thankful for that. Once that poem leaves your hands and into his, you will have almost immediate regrets about giving it to him, and as far as that poem being cute, no sweetie, that is not even remotely cute, it sounds too deep and obsessive to be cute. It's good that you can write out your feelings.
2007-07-06 15:51:19 · answer #2 · answered by carpathian mage 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the poem and i think it is a good idea to give it to him. If he really loves you than he'll accept the poem. Just make sure you give it to him when it's just you two; otherwise he might be embarrassed and tell you that he doesn't like it. That is just the way guys r i guess.
2007-07-06 15:48:13 · answer #3 · answered by Barn Babe_1 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds wonderful
2007-07-06 15:45:28 · answer #4 · answered by Tactical Medic 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes dotn listen to the first gurl ma bf likes poetry i think he will like it but u know ur boi best sooo if u think he will then he prolly will i liked ur poem by the way
2007-07-06 15:48:09 · answer #5 · answered by Desii 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes, it is a cute poem, but don't get upset if he doesn't get excited over it, men tend not to show emotions over poems.
2007-07-06 15:49:52 · answer #6 · answered by Winks 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good!!!
2007-07-06 15:44:43 · answer #7 · answered by CherishTheMoment 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
No, boys don't like poetry.
2007-07-06 15:44:05 · answer #8 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yes.....give this to him
2007-07-06 15:44:39 · answer #9 · answered by cutie 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋