“The price of shoes is related with the number of shoes the producers make.”
Price = ~ + Number
You have to look at ‘with’ as being the same as ‘and’ or ‘+’ (with = and = plus), and ‘is’ as the same as equal (=), and ‘related’ as the same as ‘implies (~)’.
While yours is a correct sentence, in that is has a subject, verb, and object, it leaves you hanging. The question you beg is, what is the price of shoes with the number of shoes related to? So logically the sentence make no sense. Compare it with, “The price of shoes is related with the number of shoes the producers make to the number of shoes sold.”
Now there is an balanced equation, this implies that this and this equal that. (Price of shoes ~ number of shoes = amount sold). In your sentence you had, (this = ~ that + that), or, Price of shoes is implies with number of shoes made.
= ~ + ,there is no balance.
I went to town with John. Is the same as, or equals, John and I went to town. John with Bill, is not the same as, John is Bill. Height is related to age, could be expressed as, ‘implied height equal age’.
If, as your teacher said, the sentence read, “The price of shoes is related with the number of shoes the producers make.” You have: number of shoes made = ~ price. While this sentence is logical and true as far as it goes but it leaves out part of the equation, and that is demand. But that is outside the scope of your question.
2007-07-03 04:42:53
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answered by thecarolinacowboy 3
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It's wrong, because related with makes no sense in the place. It's . i'm a writer, and i've been studying english for the longest time.
2007-07-03 13:23:13
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answered by princessoftheghetto07 4
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Yes the teacher is correct. It is related with something else not to something else! If that makes sence lol
Goodluck hun xxx
2007-07-03 09:08:39
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answered by ♥ Jodi ♥ Kaydi's Mummy ♥ 4
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"Related to" is right.
The only time I would use "related with" would be to mean "got along well with" or "really understood" a person.
I found I really related with her, right from the first day we met.
2007-07-03 09:08:00
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answered by Goddess of Grammar 7
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The teacher is correct.
2007-07-03 09:02:45
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answered by William D 5
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your teacher is right.
2007-07-03 09:07:52
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answered by whiteman 5
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