Please don’t be a big slob, Bob
Steve, what’s up your sleeve
Do not forget to pay, Ray
David, don’t hold me enslave’ed
Don’t try to be so tricky, Ricky
Hank, I’m walking the plank
Stop your acting so sly, Guy
Frank, he’s playing a prank
I will hold my remarks, Clark
Marty, lets go to the party
2007-07-01 01:57:02 · 9 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Not directed at anyone in particular...
2007-07-01 01:59:00 · update #1
It is silly. But, unlike me, it plays by the rules. Is it good? No. Is it poetry? Yes.
2007-07-01 02:09:04 · update #2
Paul Simonski is turning over in his virtual grave... (Squeeeeeeeeeeeek, his rotisserie needs some quantum oil)
Just jump on a turtle Myrtle
Please pick up your teeth Jeeves
Quit poking your spleen Fin
And let your bass free....
2007-07-01 05:44:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a good exercise in rhyme, but it has been done before many times.
2007-07-01 09:02:32 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Huh...ok so you can rhyme names. Try playing "The Name Game"
2007-07-01 12:15:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes it's good. And utterly meaningless which makes it funny. You know -- like it's so stupid, it's funny. It doesn't have any dry wit to it, but it does have funny internal rhyme, so good job.
2007-07-01 09:23:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good but there is no meanin 4 it!
rhymings r gr8!!
u can write a real poem insted of a silly one
2007-07-01 09:05:29 · answer #5 · answered by padma 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It reminded me of "Step out the back Jack. Don't need to be coy Roy"...
It was fun.
2007-07-01 10:13:29 · answer #6 · answered by Todd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
haha. i like it. it rhymes nicely
2007-07-01 10:24:20 · answer #7 · answered by little.miss.hot.lips 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
MMMMMMMM weird
2007-07-01 10:34:11 · answer #8 · answered by punky.earl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mm. Thanks for the 2 points.
2007-07-01 09:06:18 · answer #9 · answered by chameleon 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋