A little call,
A special crawl.
Suddenly from no where you stand up,
But start to drool.
Your little feet start running,
Your nose is dripping to.
But then that little smile reminds me how much I love you!
2007-06-30 23:58:47 · 23 answers · asked by Katja ie tattybow 1 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Newborn & Baby
i havnt got a child! t was 4 my lil cousin! im 14
2007-07-01 00:16:49 · update #1
OMG sounds like me after a drink or 10! Lol Seriously it's sweet :-)
2007-07-01 00:03:21 · answer #1 · answered by TAFF 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You give us a very realistic picture of a tot (I know because I have two nephews that are still quite little...and increasingly violent!). I love them too but don't see them that much. When the first of them was born, I thought he reminded me of nothing so much as the little aliens in "MARS ATTACKS!" but I'm getting more used to being an uncle now...
2007-07-01 05:23:43 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a cute poem describing ,no doubt, the antics of a cute little baby.It takes everybody to that cute baby-stage which all would adore to be-in-being fed whenever you are hungry,being taken care of without you asking,being loved and cuddled and having your whole world at your feet!
2007-07-01 00:18:18 · answer #3 · answered by radhakum1958 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, I think you can rearrange the words some. I do like "Suddenly from nowhere you stand up" and "Your little feet start running". I would play with it some more and then post it again.
2007-07-01 02:19:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Soo sweet! My Mom used to write little poems like that for me, and put them in a photo album. lt was corny as a kid, but l love it now! l keep meaning to do that for mine. Anyway, l love it :=)
2007-07-01 00:06:03 · answer #5 · answered by Sonja 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ahhhhh, Cute.
2007-07-01 00:01:31 · answer #6 · answered by Lou_ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that is so cute !!! im also a poem writer. You should type it up nicely and put it in a fram and hang it in the babies nursery ! So so CUTE !
2007-07-01 00:04:47 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
That was great I thought that was for your child you have a gift to be so young keep it up.
2007-07-01 01:11:06 · answer #8 · answered by Talithea H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you mispelt "too".
Your nose is dripping too.
You should keep on writing. If you've posted it up then you must enjoy it.
2007-07-01 01:12:08 · answer #9 · answered by Iain Speed 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it so much that i can't stop thinking about it for 3 days.
(especially the last line)
2007-07-01 00:04:30 · answer #10 · answered by The Pro 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋