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9/11
as the twin towers fall
a watching world aghast
such commotion disturbs the devils sleep
the antichrist is awake
his evil demons have opened the very gates of
hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2007-06-30 16:01:15 · 8 answers · asked by baz 2 in Society & Culture Religion & Spirituality

8 answers

How do i put this nicely............Its no good.
The devil or the antichrist had nothing to do with that atrocity.
And my daughter who was about 7 at the time wrote a better one.......
9/11 By Kassie
Today while getting ready for school,
My mum started crying like a fool,
Because on the TV.
People like you and me,
Were covered with dirt ,
all over their shirts,
Running for their lives,
From two tall buildings like hives.
Or jumping to their deaths,
breathing their last breaths,
As two tall towers began to fall,
Such horror was shown to us all.
On the tv
We watched, mum and me,
A place no one wanted to be.
She was 7 or 8 and did this at an Australian school.....

2007-06-30 16:29:56 · answer #1 · answered by *~Ariel Brigalow Moondust~* 6 · 2 0

A "ditty" is a song, and since I can't hear the music, nor know the tune, I can't give an educated opinion. The phrase, "commotion disturbs the devil's sleep" seems a bit contradictory, but poetry is a personal expression. I think it's great that you write and I hope you keep all of your poetry and thoughts in a collection. Writers rewrite and edit daily to perfect their ideas. Good Luck !

2007-06-30 16:15:06 · answer #2 · answered by SpongebobRoundpants 5 · 0 2

the last three lands aren't exactly what I was expecting after reading the first 4 lines

I like (such commotion disturbs the devils sleep)
its a good metaphor ( I think that is the word I'm looking for)

2007-06-30 16:05:43 · answer #3 · answered by Peggy Pirate 6 · 0 2

listen, with all this negative stuff being said against us muslims is irrelevant, cause the more you talk about us, the more people will find out about islam and convert.

2007-06-30 22:54:28 · answer #4 · answered by Abdul 5 · 0 1

Devastation!..... run away,
tired of all those games you play,
You said it was all in my head,
I'd rather put it all to bed,
One day when weve seen it through,
we'll laugh about it.... me and you

No, this was written re a break up, wot u think?
Yours was wierd for me.

2007-06-30 16:06:57 · answer #5 · answered by angi zefi 3 · 1 2

Its this type of religious clap trap that started this.
Religion is the start of war.

2007-06-30 16:16:23 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2 2

what ?

2007-06-30 16:11:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

crap

2007-06-30 16:04:23 · answer #8 · answered by Armchair Pundit 2 · 5 2

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