and if it's wrong correct it...
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Du bist meine Sonne, Du bist meine Licht, Du bist meine Schönste Gedicht für mich, Ich schreie: Ich Liebe Dich, Hörst Du mich den nicht?
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Thank you
2007-06-29 07:14:34 · 5 answers · asked by I like Your hairspray 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
You are my sun. You are my light. For me, you are my loveliest poem. I shout: I love you. Can't you hear me?
I'd change the third sentence into "Du bist meine lieblingsgedichte" -- you are my favourite poem. At the same time you slip in "liebling", which is "darling".
2007-06-29 07:18:54 · answer #1 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Du bist meine Sonne, Du bist mein Licht, Du bist das schönste Gedicht für mich, Ich schreie: Ich liebe dich, hörst du mich denn nicht?
2007-07-03 05:16:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are my sun, you are my light, you are my most beautiful poem for me, I shout: I love you, don't you hear me?"
All good, just a few alterations: "mein schönstes" because Gedicht is masculine and no capitalisation for schön because it's an adjective, no capitalisation for "du" because it's a pronoun, and the "my best poem for me" might need a bit of altering because it sounds slightly redundant. Otherwise it's very good! :)
2007-06-29 07:25:06 · answer #3 · answered by Susie 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
You are my sun, you are my light, you are the prettiest poem for me, and I cry: I love you, don't you hear me?
2007-06-29 12:47:46 · answer #4 · answered by Falco 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are my sun, you are my light.You are my beautiful poem or prose for myself. I cry out, I love you, Don't you hear me?
2007-06-29 07:21:20 · answer #5 · answered by kjh4129 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋