please help me, this English sentences have sense?

Question

I want know if this sentences have sense fou you and this mistakes... i am English student i speack Spanish

1- "While the poor leanguage lerners just use the English in their classroms; good learners use the English out the classrom and frequently are creative with this leanguage"

2- " To recognize the type of language learner is one step to be a good language learner; but you must practice everyday and learn of their problems if you want to be a good English speaker"

3- " Though the opportunity to practice English sometimes depend of external motivation like an English speaker friend, internal condition like the perceverance and the curiosity are most important"

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When do you have questions about Spanish if you want i help...

the end of my questions... please

Answer 1

Some of them are a little choppy, but your getting there.

Answer 2

1- "While the poor language learners only use English in their classroms; good learners use English out of the classroom and frequently are creative with this language"

2- " To recognize the type of language learner is one step to being a good language learner; but you must practice everyday and learn from your mistakes if you want to be a good English speaker"

3- " Though the opportunity to practice English sometimes depends on external motivation like an English speaker friend, internal condition like the perceverance and the curiosity are most important"

changed it a bit for you

Answer 3

1- "While the poor student of English just uses English in the classrom; good students use English out the classrom and are creative with it"

2- " To recognize the type of student you are is one step to learning English; but you must practice everyday and discover your problems if you want to be a good English speaker"

3- " Though the opportunity to practice English sometimes depends on opportunities to pratice; for example having a friend who speaks English, internal factors like perceverance and curiosity are most important"

I think you'll find that these sentences convey the same (or close to the same) message, while being a little easier to read.

Answer 4

Very nice; however, I'm going to rewrite your sentences as I would normally write them - correct spelling and phrasing.

1- While the poor language learners just use English in their classrooms, good learners use the English outside the classroom and are frequently creative with this language.

2- To become a good language learner, one step is to recognize the type of language learner one is, but one must practice everyday and learn his or her problems if he or she wants to be a good English speaker.

3- Though the opportunity to practice English sometimes depends on external motivation like having an English speaking friend, one's internal condition like perseverance and curiosity are most important.

great job though! In English, you don't have to put "the" in front of most nouns like in Spanish sometimes. :) good luck! hope i helped a little!

Answer 5

1- "While the poor language learner just use English in their classroom; good learners use English outside the classroom and are frequently creative with the language"

2- "To recognize the the type of language used is one step to being a good language learner; but you must practice everyday and learn of their problems if you want to be a good speaker of English.

3- "Though th opportunity to practice English sometimes depends on external motivation like an English speaking friend, internal motivation like perseverance and curiosity are most important".

Answer 6

I am not sure if these are all correct, as it depends on the context of what you are saying, but i tried :) I tried to correct the whole thing by the way!

Please help me, do these English sentences make sense?
I want to know if these sentences make sense....
I am an English student, and i speak Spanish.

1- "While the poor language learners just use English in their classrooms; good learners use English out of the classroom and are frequently creative with this language"

2- " To be good at speaking the English language, you must practise everyday and learn their problems if you want to speak English well.

3- " Though the opportunity to practise English sometimes depends on external motivation like an English speaking friend, internal conditions like the perseverance and the curiosity are the most important"

I am learning Spanish myself! Hope this helps but please note that for a couple of them, i have completely changed them as i didn't know what you were trying to say!

Buenos suertes y adios! :)

Answer 7

You are almost there but a few words are spelled incorrectly leanguage is language and also remove the "quotation marks because they are not needed unless you are stating something someone said or is saying.
Perceverance is spelled wrong it is Perseverance and always capitalize I it is never i unless it is in a word.
Learners a teacher can not learn you they can only teach you
2.In order to become a student that can speak English fluent you have to practice daily.One other way to become fluent in a different language is to learn of your problems.If you would like to become a more fluent speaker then you would have to study and practice daily.

Answer 8

1. While the poor language students just use English in their classrooms, good students use English out of the classroom and are often creative with this language.
2. To recognize the type of language student is one step to be a good language student, but you must practice everyday and learn from your mistakes if you want to speak English well.
3. Through the opportunity to practice English sometimes depends on external motivation like a friend who speaks Englih, internal condition like the percerverance and curiosity are most important.

Answer 9

1-It's spelled language...and learners...It makes sense, but should be worded differently. "Poor English students will only practice English in their classrooms, whereas good English students incoporate their learning into their daily lives."

2-Everything's spelled correctly. I don't quite understand what you're trying to say by 'and learn of their problems.' Everything else is fine though.

3-Instead of 'English speaker friend' change it to 'English speaking friend.' Perseverance is spelled like this. I think the 'condition' after 'internal' should be better if changed to 'motivation.'

Answer 10

People have given you good advice here, but just one other little thing for you. When you use the word I in a sentence, and you're talking about yourself, you should use a capital letter and not small case i, this is because you're important, it's a noun which needs a capital letter. Good luck!

Answer 11

Corrections: A) it rather is too good of an expression! B) it rather is too enormous of a situation! C) it rather is already grammatically ultimate.. yet once you're attempting to apply it to signify a "enormous situation", then no community english speaker could say that. :)