as i was sitting there listening to music this was a thought that i put on paper.
Lonelyness
The darkness from withing is overcoming me, it is getting harder everyday to put a smile on. This is causing me to feel unwanted, unloved, and alone. Knowing nobody is willing to give you a chance to show them how great you really are. Mind games after mind games makes you wonder if it is even worth letting them into your heart. Spending my days thinking about how to cure this sickness. Is there a cure? Will you rescue me from this abyss? Will you be the one who has the ability to see past what causes the others to retreat? Are you the light at the end of the tunnel? Show me that dreams do come true. When you find me I will lead you to bliss.
id like your opinion. good and bad it doesnt matter
2007-06-28 13:38:27 · 4 answers · asked by dwickleworth 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
You must be a good swimmer so you do not sink........... practice and you will be perfect.............Find yourself and what you want and I will be there waiting for you........................
2007-06-28 13:47:53 · answer #1 · answered by quen 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You certainly have a future as a poet or a lyricist for musicians.With respect to your implied loneliness, please don't despair.Your writing exposes you as a warm sensitive ,caring and giving soul.Someone worthy of you is bound to walk into your life very soon and when they do, I'm sure you will lead them to bliss as you said.Good luck buddy.
2007-06-28 13:51:01 · answer #2 · answered by abbeycoolit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is actually pretty good to show and right your feeling out on paper! so it is good and pretty cool!
2007-06-28 13:42:19 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good one...
2007-06-28 13:42:38 · answer #4 · answered by wittlewabbit 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋