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could you please help to translate this sentence : "Etant donné que les produits X,Y,Z ont béneficiés d'un plan commercial le mois passé, les ventes affichées pour se mois indique une baisse significative due au sur-stockage réalisé par les clients durant la période précedente"

Is the below a good translation:
"Knowing that the products namely X,Y,Z have benefited from the Discount plan applied last month, the monthly sales for June for those products has decreased due to the over storage realized by the customers last period"

really thank you for your help.

2007-06-24 04:10:47 · 7 answers · asked by reda 3 in Society & Culture Languages

sorry for the "S"e mois !!

2007-06-24 04:16:57 · update #1

7 answers

Looks good to me.

2007-06-24 04:13:42 · answer #1 · answered by FORNIDO 3 · 0 0

I would translate it to the following:

'Given that the products X, Y and Z have benefited from a commercial plan over the past few months, the sales posted for these months indicates a significant decrease due to the over-storage carried out by the customers during the preceding time period.'

That doesn't sound exactly right, though. For one thing, I'm not sure what 'plan commercial' is supposed to translate to. You can find a good french/english online dictionary here:
http://www.wordreference.com/

2007-06-24 04:18:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

Since products X,Y,Z were under a marketing plan last month, the sales posted for this month (ce mois, not se mois) show a significant drop due to overstocking by customers during the previous period.

2007-06-24 04:15:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Since products X, Y, Z profited from a commercial plan the month spent, the sales posted for month indicates a significant fall due to on-storage carried out by the customers during the previous period”

2007-06-24 04:14:26 · answer #4 · answered by silverearth1 7 · 0 1

See if you like this:

Given that the products X,Y, and Z benefitted from the discount plan last month, the reported sales for this month reflect a significant decrease due to the customers' stocking up on the product during the preceding period.

2007-06-24 04:19:04 · answer #5 · answered by madrededos 3 · 1 1

Because of the marketing (or discount) plan aimed at products X, Y and Z last month, customers stocked up at that time, and so this month's sales of those products have been significantly lower.

2007-06-24 05:33:16 · answer #6 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0 0

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2007-06-24 06:03:44 · answer #7 · answered by c3345 3 · 0 0

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