a new serum eradicates the illeness
an old man rising from his wheelchair
when suffering unknown attacks the painless
and common animals becoming rare
if the earth is dying of the growing thirst,
rain shall fall on dried out soil
and every kind of bud shall burst
a sough of relief to insects-turmoil
as water spins in circles twice
spiders,snakes and little mice
get twisted around and tumble down
when nature calls we all shall drawn
2007-06-21 12:30:22 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
From 1-10, I'll give it a 9. Nice work, Jason.
2007-06-21 15:44:39 · answer #1 · answered by Buddy Hodor 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-06-21 19:34:57 · answer #2 · answered by Moanika 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Maybe work on your meter a little. But I like it. It has a dry humorous twist^_^
2007-06-21 19:35:00 · answer #3 · answered by Sasa<3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it because it has a edgy rock to it and it is really doped out cool dude.
2007-06-21 19:34:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2007-06-21 19:33:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes i like very much
2007-06-21 19:34:28 · answer #6 · answered by Stan the man 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i just gave u a standing ovation (claps) very nice
2007-06-21 19:34:41 · answer #7 · answered by * SeñørITA * 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes I like it...
2007-06-21 19:34:24 · answer #8 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
tell you what jason i dont know much about pomes but i liked it.
2007-06-21 19:34:38 · answer #9 · answered by Supercowboyman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it. It's great.
2007-06-21 19:35:06 · answer #10 · answered by Nico 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋