can someone re-phrase this for me?

Question

everytime I look at you, I feel so completely dismantled

ohh...and does it sound bad? like is it a bad thing to say to a person u love?

Answer 1

everytime i look at you my world melts around me.

Answer 2

If someone said this to me, I wouldn't be impressed. One shouldn't feel as though he/she is falling apart. Love should ADD to a person, not take him/her to pieces. It should make a person feel whole or completed, as though a part of him/her was added to the puzzle and now the picture is complete. I'd really prefer the person I love to say something like: "Every time I look at you, I feel that I've been made whole."

Answer 3

everytime i see you my world falls to peices was the best one i think, and i wouldnt really advise you say this to a partner unless it us being used in the right context because it could be taken the wrong way!

''i love you so much, everytime i look at you my world falls to peices.. your all i think about'' now thats cute. but used alone it sounds very broken hearted i think

GoodLuck =]

Answer 4

Each time I look at you, I fall apart..(?)--I think this may come off as a bad thing.

Ever heard that old Patsy Cline song that says..,"I fall to pieces, each time I see you again..."?

You could try, " Just one look at you takes my breath away.", or ,"Looking at you shakes up my whole world."

Answer 5

like everytime you look at that person, you feel all shatterd inside?..
good or bad..?
i guess saying shatterd as in butterflies, or heartbroken.

Answer 6

everytime i see you my world falls to peices

Answer 7

everytime i see u, vomit comes outta my nose!