please correct my grammar?

Question

Vanessa Lengies started professionally acting at the age of 9. Some of her credits include: Arthur, Are You Afraid of the Dark, and Radio Active. She was a co-host on the show , Popular Mechanics for Kids, which she was also a fan of the show before becoming a member of the cast. She did her first movie (TV) in 2000 called "Ratz," and was nominated a Young Artist Award for that role. She has also been in "The Perfect Man," "Waiting" and "Stick It."

Answer 1

Vanessa Lengies started acting professionally at the age of 9. Some of her credits include: "Arthur, Are You Afraid of the Dark", and "Radio Active". She was a co-host on the show "Popular Mechanics for Kids", a show of which she was also a fan before becoming a member of the cast. She made her first TV movie ("Ratz"), in 2000 and was nominated for a Young Artist Award for that role. She has also appeared in "The Perfect Man," "Waiting" and "Stick It."

Answer 2

Vanessa Lengies started professionally acting at the age of nine. Some of her credits include: "Arthur, Are You Afraid of the Dark?" and "Radio Active". She was a co-host on the show , Popular Mechanics for Kids, which she was also a fan of the show before becoming a member of the cast. She did her first T.V. movie in 2000 called, "Ratz," and was nominated a Young Artist Award for that role. She has also been in "The Perfect Man," "Waiting," and "Stick It."

Answer 3

Vanessa Lengies started acting professionally at the age of 9. Some of her credits include: "Arthur," "Are You Afraid of the Dark," and "Radio Active." She was a co-host on the show "Popular Mechanics for Kids," a show of which she was also a fan before becoming a member of the cast. She made her first TV movie "Ratz" in 2000, and was nominated for a Young Artist Award for that role. She has also appeared in "The Perfect Man," "Waiting," and "Stick It."

Answer 4

Try it like this:

Vanessa Lengies started acting professionally at the age of nine. Some of her credits include, Arthur, Are You Afraid of the Dark and Radio Active. She was a co-host on the show, Popular Mechanics for Kids. She was a big fan of that show before becoming a member of the cast. She starred in her first movie, a television special called Ratz, in 2000 and was nominated for a Young Artist Award for that role. She has also been in "The Perfect Man," "Waiting" and "Stick It."

Answer 5

Always write numbers from 1-9 in letters instead of numbers (some ppl would include 0)
Don’t forget the “?” in a question, in this case if the name of the movie/play includes it
Try not to use too many pronouns - e.g. use her name instead of “she”
Starting sentences with verbs, keeps the reader interested

Try something like this ….


Vanessa Lengies started acting professionally at the age of nine. Some of her credits include, Arthur, Are You Afraid of the Dark? and Radio Active. She was a co-host on the show “Popular Mechanics for Kids.” Being herself a big fan of the show before becoming a cast member. Performing in her first movie in 2000, a TV special called "Ratz", Vanessa Lengies was nominated for a Young Artist Award in her role. She has also appeared in "The Perfect Man", "Waiting", and "Stick It."


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Answer 6

How about this, with the names of the shows in italics: Vanessa Lengies started acting profesionally at the age of 9. Some of her credits include Arthur; Are You Afraid of the Dark; and Radio Active. She was a co-host of Popular Mechanics for Kids and had been a fan prior to joining the cast. In 2000, her role in Ratz, her first television movie, earned her a Young Artist Award nomination. She also played in The Perfect Man, Waiting, and Stick It.


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Answer 7

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