take a break from trying to figure each other out and write a haiku about what it is you believe. please don't use this to bash other people. this poem should be about YOU in relation to what you believe.
a haiku has 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 in the last. there are probably way more rules in writing one, but this, i think, is just a basic form.
i'll give you a couple of examples. i'm Christian, so i'll try to reflect that. note to those who are REAL poets, please excuse my pathetic attempt to write:
the dying flower
suddenly begins to blossom
she's alive again
another one could be like:
i am a Christian
i believe in Jesus Christ
He has saved my soul
i hope you have fun figuring out what you want to write! write more than one if you want!
2007-06-14 12:51:29 · 17 answers · asked by becki 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
oops! i messed up on my first one. it should say:
the dying flower
suddenly starts to blossom
she's alive again
it's hard to get the syllables right sometimes!!
2007-06-14 14:39:39 · update #1
I am atheist
Oh crap! Nothing's after death...
Enjoy the present.
~Max
By the way, this is a very clever idea. I like it! Very creative!
2007-06-14 12:57:48 · answer #1 · answered by Max 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This universe has
a marvelous, natural,
scientific truth.
Thousands of past gods
None any different but
a few still linger
The design concept
fails utterly in practice
offers no answers.
Life has more wonder
When there's nothing at its end
False dreams cheapen life
Thrive in the present
Be good to others in life
Spread truth, not old myths
How about that? Pretty bad, but also hastily made.
2007-06-14 20:02:02 · answer #2 · answered by Mike K 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
i will answer this in a minute i just have to comment to all the atheist, so they dont believe in anything ? do they just think when we die that's it? what about the proof even from psychic's, i knew they did'nt believe in god, but i thought they at least believed in a spiritual world, wow! they must really fear death, that would suck, it's so hard to believe especially when we have so much proof that there is live after death, im a christian 1/2 jewish but i think im much more spiritual then religious, they must feel terrible when a loved one dies,
2007-06-22 16:02:47 · answer #3 · answered by Elizabeth (the jewish princess) 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am born again
Because Jesus cared for Me
So therefore I am
Sinful and unloved
My sins nailed to Calvary
Now a new creature
What wonderful love
His example showed to us
I now love you too
2007-06-22 18:51:56 · answer #4 · answered by bubbleheadyeoman 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The Lord made daisies,
butterflies, rain and beef.
I love Him for that.
2007-06-14 19:57:57 · answer #5 · answered by Munchkin 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't worry about
the afterlife; work instead
for heaven on earth.
2007-06-14 20:41:27 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Live a happy life
Enjoy every minute
Death not be feared
2007-06-22 17:33:28 · answer #7 · answered by Oliver K 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jesus can forgive my sins
I can be closer to my savior
Jesus loves me very much
2007-06-21 03:06:50 · answer #8 · answered by Michelle 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm the only one
who can think the way I do
I believe, can you
2007-06-14 20:00:01 · answer #9 · answered by Shiverbane 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i am human
i am not good nor evil
i try to be nice and considerate
i make mistakes, some foolish and dumb
i am atheist or agnostic?
for i believe god is conscious
yet do not go church or temple
i can no longer tell anymore.
2007-06-14 20:02:54 · answer #10 · answered by Creek S 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋