pre-note: i am not looking for it was good. i want helpful tips to help me improve as a writer. i want tips that will help me grow as a poet. thanks
how many times,
how many times,
have i watched you dissapear?
how many times,
how many times,
have i tasted the bitter taste of death?
how many times,
how many times,
have i smelled the deep stench of greif?
how many times,
how many times,
have i heard the sorrowful- breathy cry of- "it's o.k."?
how many times,
how many times,
have i felt the cold take hold of my soul?
how many times,
how many times,
have i awoke in a cold sweat-
only to cry myself to sleep again?
Your life was short,
Your dreams short lived,
But i will not foreget.
You my sister, are my life,
My world,
And my light
2007-06-13
14:57:29
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