before u read this let me gohead and say tat im not emo i just write wat i feel and write wat i think
anywayz tis is my first song tat ive completly finshed the whole song/the music is done 2 i just cant post it wit the song
anywayz i just want 2 know wat u think of it
tell me wat u think even if u dont like it and wat i could do 2 make it better
here it is
BLADES
Here I am
sitting in my room, with a blade in my hand
counting down the minutes
till I slice my hand
I gave you all the sings that this was was coming
but noone ever listened
you said you wont
well guess what
now I ******* am
This is how is has to be
if I want to release all the pain thats inside me
it feels like a blade is cutting trough my heart
feels like the devil is tearing it apart
it just gets worse
every damn day I get up
Now im back to sitting in my room, with a blade in my hand
counting down the mintues
till I price my skin
I take the blade
and run it across my wrist
watching the blood runout, and hit the floor
noone has ever seen all the pain thats inside me
I tried to keep it hid
so none could ever see
I guess none can ever feel another persons pain
but all I know
is that mine is definently real
I cant take this anymore
why did you leave me
I cannot stop all this bleeding
when death took you
it left my heart an empty stone
and all hope ran dry
It left me feeling so cold and alone
right now im standing over your dead body
hoping you can hear me
can you hear me
You left me full of pain
you ate my ate my heart out
ripped it form inside me
the day.......the day that you died
Now its time for me to say goodbye to everyone and everything
and time for me to say hello to you agin
this world has left me scared hoplessly lost
but now I will find you agin
on the other side
In this pool of blood
my bodys lying on the floor
with a blade in my hand
now I can be with my love once more
2007-06-13 14:35:32 · 11 answers · asked by Chris M 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Other - Music
Oh my this song sounds way too "real and creepy!" If this is a for real "last will and testament" someone better get help fast! =
2007-06-13 14:59:55
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Dude its awesome. I wanna write songs like that too. Ignore the bad stuff people say about it.
2007-06-13 14:38:43 · answer #2 · answered by :) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its got sum spelling mistakes but its a nice rap song u got i can relate to it totally. keep the freestyling up.
it is gay. blades of glory
2007-06-13 14:39:47 · answer #3 · answered by chris a 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's powerful...to say the least but I'm not a stranger to that feeling.
2007-06-13 14:43:57 · answer #4 · answered by sunpansy14 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I think, "Hey! I just answered this question! I hate it when people double-post the EXACT SAME QUESTION more than once"
2007-06-13 14:38:43 · answer #5 · answered by decoratedemergency 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great song!!
I want to know the tune tho
the lyrics are good.
2007-06-13 14:55:58 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW...you sound depressed. Its very emotional.
2007-06-13 14:38:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think you might wanna get some help.
2007-06-13 14:42:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what do i think - i think you need some help - yikes, i'm scared for u
2007-06-13 14:42:30 · answer #9 · answered by dmcg1012 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg dude pleaz get some help u sound realy depressed and why would u think that way please get help! :(
2007-06-13 14:45:03 · answer #10 · answered by Jess ka 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋