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The Fish God

There once was a fish
Who thought he was a dog
But when he tried to wag his tail
He hopped just like a frog
And when he tried to speak
The sound was so insane
He finally had to realize
The mistake was in his brain

And then he was a cat
Who though he was a bird
But when he tried to fly away
It was just so absurd
And when he tried to sing
A song so sweet and fair
The noise was so intolerable
Oh so hard to bare

But now he is a human
Who thinks he is a god
But he is just the creature
Who belches forth the smog
He eats away our planet
Don't let him try to talk
For all his word are meaningless
You better listen to the dog.

Answer 1

I think that if you wrote this piece you should be very proud of yourself.I was weeping when I got to the end of this beautiful poem.I also think you should look to publish your work if it is a carer that you wish to pursue in the future.In one word I will sum up your poem..........Wonder full

Answer 2

Excellent 10/10. Great rhyme and subject choice.

Answer 3

People in the United States have too low an IQ to understand your poetry. You'll die early an unrecognized genius if you keep this up......from starvation.

Answer 4

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Answer 5

Excellent! First rate...a cut above the rest!

Answer 6

I like it, I don't know why but I do!!! lol

I'm sure there's a moral in there somewhere!!! Well done!!!

Answer 7

Interestingly [not nastily] kind of weird.

Answer 8

excellent work
it was a good composition

Answer 9

9/10
Thought provoking!

Answer 10

I liked it.