it's very short.
The cold metal searches my skin,
Then digs and finds blood within.
The wound opens like a mouth
And silently screams out red emotion.
2007-06-09 04:48:26 · 23 answers · asked by pullthetrigger 6 in Health ➔ Mental Health
Theo G - no idea what that means. looked in the dictionary and it wasn't in there.
2007-06-09 05:10:46 · update #1
Nice. I like the 'red emotion'.
2007-06-09 05:11:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it, but that's the dark side in me. Cutting is a way of blocking emotional pain by creating the physical. Might work temporarily for some people, but then you end up with lots of scars that are very hard to get rid of/cover up later in life!
Awesome poem, just hope poetry is an outlet for you that keeps you from cutting!
2007-06-09 05:05:22 · answer #2 · answered by godzgirl 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Did YOU write it? ... and how angry are you? "Triggering" tells me that you are educated about Mental Health Care. Having got through a 'few' health care problems in my life... I can tell you that the needle doesn't get much nicer. You need to ask more questions... and, perhaps, to look for MORE help than you will find on Yahoo! You're in my heart. Hugs, Gina C.
2007-06-09 04:57:07 · answer #3 · answered by Gina C 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Theo G means 'Macabre'
I can agree
A bit of a play on words, it works, but it is too violent for my personal taste.
The fact I don't like it, doesn't mean it is no good, it is perfect otherwise it wouldn't give me the violent images, don't change it.
2007-06-09 11:01:18 · answer #4 · answered by DoctressWho 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too dark for me. It triggers a need in me to get out in the sunshine and see the better parts of life.
2007-06-09 04:57:32 · answer #5 · answered by clarity 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Retreat....perfected knees drawn to chest arms tightly wrapped a HAZMAT vest good intentions are lethal Trust is for fools love is a mask words . .
2016-05-20 23:02:58 · answer #6 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not triggering at all. It sounds like its an explicitly detailed way of doing blood work....
2007-06-09 05:01:36 · answer #7 · answered by Leila 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really think you have alot of anger balled up inside you and guessing your a pretty dark person you should try going outside and seeing the good in life.....it doesn't always have to be dark.......
2007-06-09 04:59:52 · answer #8 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poems the story of my life :( Very good though
2007-06-09 07:31:20 · answer #9 · answered by Ghost♂ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Triggers the memory of my trip to the dentist last week.
2007-06-09 04:51:57 · answer #10 · answered by Del Piero 10 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋