little bird,
flying up in the sky,
above the water,
the tide rises,
as do the waves,
higher and higher,
towering over the beach,
chaos,
winds,
tragedies,
then calm,
quiet,
peace,
the little bird returns,
the nest gone,
little tears falling on the branch,
a sad, quiet calm,
only with passing time,
is there a new nest again.
2007-06-05 11:07:16 · 13 answers · asked by iANNA! 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
wow, of all the poems i've ever read here on Y!A, this is the only one i've truly liked. good job. it's really nice. why would anyone think it should have to rhyme?
2007-06-05 11:13:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-05 01:18:12 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Soothing the calm after the storm. Good work.
2007-06-13 03:04:28 · answer #3 · answered by Margo 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's very good. Gives perspective in face of tragedy.
2007-06-12 14:32:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Fantastically great.......don't need rhyming in a poem. Others might think poetry is all about rhyme but, you have shown them that you need not!!! Good job!
2007-06-13 09:53:36 · answer #5 · answered by missellie 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not another one. Why don't you submit them to your English teacher?
2007-06-13 06:05:31 · answer #6 · answered by Dark Lotus 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
that is a great poem
2007-06-13 10:34:33 · answer #7 · answered by john b 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
pretty darned good keep writing!
2007-06-13 10:04:29 · answer #8 · answered by cheri h 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
boring
anything other than birds and peace and this same crap over and over?
2007-06-13 03:35:05 · answer #9 · answered by L_PJS 3 · 0⤊ 3⤋
very good . do you have any more?
2007-06-13 05:10:38 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋