Do my sentences make sence?
my sentences are..
1. Because my concerning field is marketing, I have tried to learn about marketing field.
---> concerning field ,, does it make sense? I'd like to express
that I am interested in the marketing field.
2007-06-05 07:45:14 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Try "field of interest." That's a pretty common and acceptable term in applications at colleges.
2007-06-05 07:47:53 · answer #1 · answered by reymarblue 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Say because my field of study is Marketing, I am trying to learn the Marketing field.
2007-06-05 14:49:20 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because my field of interest is marketing, I have tried to learn as much as I can about it.
2007-06-05 14:48:28 · answer #3 · answered by Uncle John 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"concerning field" is not correct. "Field of concern" would be more right but would imply that you were worried about something in the marketing field.
I'd make it "intended specialization" or "planned area of focus" -- you don't want "field" twice in a sentence. You need a "the" between "about" and "marketing" as well.
2007-06-05 14:48:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, it doesn't quite make sense but I can work out what you mean. Perhaps you could say...
I have tried to learn about the marketing field because it interests me.
2007-06-05 14:48:41 · answer #5 · answered by Jenn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, it does not make sense. Concern is not the right word to use either and you should not start with because.
I am very interested in the field of marketing therefore I have tried to learn more about it.
2007-06-05 14:49:01 · answer #6 · answered by Barkley Hound 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just say "Because my field of interest is in marketing..." Makes much more sense that way
2007-06-05 14:47:55 · answer #7 · answered by Jon C 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It does not appear to be grammatically correct. suggestion.. My concerning field is Marketing, therefor I have tried to learn about Marketing Field.
2007-06-05 14:50:34 · answer #8 · answered by dottie42 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your sentence is gramatically incorrect, it does not make sense and is repetitive. Try something like this:-
'Because my chosen field and prime interest is Marketing, I have tried to concentrate on learning more about that particular topic'.
'Concerning field' doesn't make sense,
2007-06-05 15:09:16 · answer #9 · answered by quatt47 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not in the least.
"Because I have an interest in Marketing, I have tried to learn as much as I can about it."
2007-06-05 15:18:33 · answer #10 · answered by Experto Credo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NEVER START WITH BECAUSE!!!!
Due to the fact that my relevant field is marketing......
Since I have experience in marketing, I have tired to learn about other aspects of the field.
2007-06-05 14:49:58 · answer #11 · answered by Miss Jamie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋