This is the original sentence: "I found it difficult to explain my ideas to him."
And this is the sentence i have to complete: I found it difficult to____ to her.
I need to complete it using the word across and 5 words including across.
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2007-06-05 06:26:00 · 10 answers · asked by Cheshire Riddle 6 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
How about "I found it difficult to get my main point across to her." ?
2007-06-05 06:33:35 · answer #1 · answered by fizzygurrl1980 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-18 14:42:38 · answer #2 · answered by ricaurte 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I found it difficult to get my message safely across to her.
2007-06-05 06:33:11 · answer #3 · answered by DARIA. - JOINED MAY 2006 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I found it difficult to get my ideas across to her, just as bad as getting my ideas across to him.
2007-06-05 06:30:43 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Try this:
I found it difficult to get across my ideas on to her.
Regards,
Azzi
2007-06-05 06:37:48 · answer #5 · answered by Azzi4ZHA 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i found it difficult to 'freely come across my ideas' to her...
i think thats what u mean?
2007-06-05 06:39:06 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, it's only four words, but try inserting: "get my message across"
2007-06-05 06:28:21 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My point came across difficultly??
2007-06-05 06:29:25 · answer #8 · answered by Small Town Gal 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say the proper word to fill that blank is "relate."
2007-06-05 06:32:42 · answer #9 · answered by Justin B 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"I had difficulty getting my point across". You don't want to put "to her" after that, it would be dangling!! Good luck!!
2007-06-05 06:34:14 · answer #10 · answered by pumpkin 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋