*I Miss You*
I miss you
And you know it’s true
You might not remember me
But you made me very happy
But when ever you were taken away
I cried every night and day
I felt horrible without saying goodbye
And that’s why I would cry
Your pictures in my room
And I really hope to see you soon
But I know I won’t ever get to
Since you have another family that loves you
You’ll always be in my heart
Nothing could tear us apart
I’ve got myself drowning in tears
Just thinking back 2 or 3 years
I wish you could hear me
Even though that couldn’t be
I just wanted to say…
I love you
And I miss you
this was dedicated to my baby mitzi, she was a cat and she turned one when my dad took her away and i raised her when she was like a couple of weeks old and she would cuddle with me in my bed when i would try to sleep and she would attack the covers when i would make up my bed...she was so sweet
2007-06-05 03:13:09 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pets ➔ Other - Pets
I think it is very sweet that you dedicated a poem to your beloved cat. I think it was very cruel for her to be taken from you. Hopefully one day you will be able to have another to love and take care of.
2007-06-05 03:22:33 · answer #1 · answered by porkchop 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry about your cat. I've had cats all my life and I have lost several over the years and still mourn for them. Still, this isn't a poem. It has no poetic devices, no meter and no imagery. It's a sort of letter to your cat. If you want to learn to write poetry, take some books of poetry out of the library and read them. Then you'll understand what I mean.
2007-06-05 10:23:50 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I thought you were writing about a man....who is married......or a baby you gave up for adoption.
very sweet. I love kitties too and I foster and have to give them up for adoption. It gets easier the more i do it. I try not to get so attached.
2007-06-13 01:27:44 · answer #3 · answered by FoodLOVER 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was a real sweet heartfelt poem for a cat...must have been an awesome cat!
2007-06-05 10:18:07 · answer #4 · answered by amasmomma05 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem i give it 5 thumbs up im sorry about your cat i wkould lock myself up in my room if my mom ever to away my cats
2007-06-12 12:58:44 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am sorry to hear this. Your poem is very sweet.
2007-06-05 10:16:51 · answer #6 · answered by funluvinsheridan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are a sensitive person and I wish you all the best there is.
2007-06-05 10:18:26 · answer #7 · answered by Cheers For All 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very adorable
really, you have a great talent
keep on doing it
(sory for the loss)
2007-06-10 19:02:17 · answer #8 · answered by sirene 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww...so sweet, but sad! Good work!
2007-06-05 10:18:30 · answer #9 · answered by Saf 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont usally read poems but that was good
2007-06-05 10:37:48 · answer #10 · answered by tkerbag 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋