I like Kate! No, take that back, I'm in love with Kate. Since I saw her movie "Serendipity," I have been completely obsessed with her. She's so beautiful and she has that sexy English accent. I haven't actually seen many of her movies but the few that I have seen showed her amazing talent. I'm looking forward to seeing her in more movies.
2007-06-04 01:57:34 · 8 answers · asked by mbw m 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Your version:
I like Kate! No, I take that back, I'm in love with Kate. Eversince I saw her in the movie "Serendipity," I have been completely obsessed with her. She's so beautiful and she has that sexy English accent. I haven't actually seen many of her movies but the few that I have seen, showed her amazing talent. I'm looking forward to seeing her in more movies.
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I like Kate _______! No, I take that back, I'm in love with her. Eversince I saw her in the movie, "Serendipity", I've been completely obsessed with her. Not only is she so beautiful, she has that sexy British accent that drives me crazy! I haven't seen most of her films, but the few that I've seen displayed her superb acting prowess. I can't wait to see her appear in another movie. (the new one she'll be making) or I'm looking forward to seeing more of her movies! (the ones you haven't seen)
2007-06-04 02:31:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 2⤋
it is ok but try this:
I like Kate! No, I take that back, I'm in love with Kate. Ever since I saw her movie "Serendipity," I have been completely obsessed with her. She's so beautiful and she has that sexy English accent. I haven't actually seen many of her movies but the few that I have showed her amazing talent. I'm looking forward to seeing more of her movies.
2007-06-04 09:08:41 · answer #2 · answered by J 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Yes, that is correct grammar, but you are missing a couple of commas. Put one between movies and but, and you could put one between beautiful and and.
2007-06-04 09:02:10 · answer #3 · answered by Purdey EP 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Looks perfect to me ... complimenti.
It's OK to leave out the subject pronoun in this kind of idiomatic, informal text. In fact, I would say it's even better to leave it out, for consistency of linguistic register.
I would leave it as it is. OK, the commas aren't perfect.
2007-06-04 11:50:13 · answer #4 · answered by Cosimo )O( 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The grammar is correct. Any changes will bring only stylistic effects.
2007-06-04 09:46:59 · answer #5 · answered by T. Alis 1 · 3⤊ 2⤋
Always use a comma before the word, "but".
2007-06-04 10:14:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
The grammar is fine.
2007-06-04 09:01:31 · answer #7 · answered by wendy08010 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
All I would change would be to add an "I" before "take that back". You're taking it back, not telling the other person to.
Beckinsale?
2007-06-04 09:42:10 · answer #8 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 5⤋