Ok peoples who are good with word I need help once again, I know what to say just not how to word it.?

Question

Please read this pargraph and reword it correctly. I am awful with word but know what I want to say please help me and reword and rearranbge if need in this pargraph for me.

A warmer climate would probably have far-reaching effects on agriculture and forestry, managed and un-managed ecosystems, including natural habitats, human health, water resources, and sea level depending on climate responses. The concern that human activities are affecting the heat/energy-exchange balance between Earth, the atmosphere, and space, and inducing global climate change, often termed global warming." Human activities, particularly the burning of fossil fuels, have increased atmospheric carbon dioxide (CO2) and other trace greenhouse gases. If these gases continue to accumulate in the atmosphere at current rates, most scientists believe global warming would occur through intensification of Earth's natural heat-trapping "greenhouse effect." Possible impacts might be seen as both positive and negative.

Answer 1

It is fine almost sounds like you pulled it out of a book or magazine

Answer 2

At first, I thought it was a good way of getting certain individuals to think about the issue and read some about it but I did notice a few things I would change-I have bad vision and am slow at typing so it will be awhile before I respond back...

Edit: sorry it took so long-my son came home from school and I saw that the dishes needed to be taken care of, etc...anyway, here I am. On the last sentence, since the rest of the paragraph is worded strongly with examples, you may want to add some (examples). I, myself, am not entirely sure what positive impacts there could be. Unless you consider the different changes that would be made.
I.E.-more people would recycle, different means of producing energy-new inventions and/or techniques that are discovered, the general population would learn more about all environmental issues, etc....

'A warmer climate would probably have far-reaching effects on several conditions, depending on climate response. Examples would be agriculture and forestry, un-managed and managed ecosystems, including natural habitats, human health, water resources and sea levels. There is concern that human activities are affecting the heat/energy exchange between Earth, the atmosphere and space, inducing global climate change, sometimes termed as ‘Global Warming’.
Human activities, particularly the burning of fossil fuels, have increased atmospheric carbon dioxide (CO2) and other trace greenhouse gases. If these gases continue to accumulate in the atmosphere at current rates, most scientists believe Global Warming would occur through an increase in the Earth’s natural heat trapping ‘greenhouse effect’. Possible impacts might be seen as positive and/or others negative.'

Answer 3

It looks goo to me. Especially that last part that says, "Possible impacts might be seen as both positive and negative." I get really tired of irrational people screaming that we are all doomed unless we take drastic action right now, no matter what the cost. They must be assuming that all possible impacts are extremely negative; that positive impacts are impossible.

Answer 4

This is quite grammattically correct. Some minor suggestions:

. . . sea level, depending . . .

The concern IS that human activities . . .

(The last sentence is ambiguous . . . don't you want your statements to either support one point of view or the other?)

Answer 5

first, Your second sentence needs and action verb. Second, find a better transition between your second and third sentence. Other than that, it was fine the way it is.