Here's an orginal song my 14 y.o. cousin wrote, she asked me what he should add or take from it?:
Verse 1: You think you're captivating, standing there looking @ me
but nothing you've done so far has proven what you claim to be
Kept dropping tired hints, like every other guy
So I deflected everything you said with just one reply
Chorus: Show me something more...
Your skills just really arent that great
Past their expiration date
Grab my attention...
Wont you make yourself stand out
'Cause right now what your all about
Is just...
Not what I
Am really looking for
(SKIPPING THE 2ND VERSE)....
Bridge: I guess I don't mean that much to you
If that's all you're willing to do,
But I guess you didn't know
That's the way it goes
Gave so little effort now you're reaping what you sow
But you don't want the world to know
That you forcively let go
What you could never really hold
So you'll sit at home alone
And sigh, sigh,sigh, sigh.
(Chorus x2)
2007-05-30 14:09:12 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating