What do you think of my poem?

Question

Just To Be With You

Sometimes I wonder
What life would be
If god hadn't presented
You to me?

What if the berries
Didn't fall from the tree?
What if all men
Were blind and couldn't see?

Would our love
Still remain so strong?
Would the months that you're away
Really seem so long?

Would this earth
Be a place to belong
If someone said
That loving you was wrong?

I know I couldn't bear
A me without you,
'Cause it would truly make
Life so down and blue.

Just to let you know
That what I say is true,
Just know I'd give up the world
So I could be with you!

Answer 1

Sorry,fella.That things is like a first grade poem.The meaning is so superficial, showing an unrealistic world were the fantasy is the main subject.Let me give you an example.You wrote"A me without you,'cause it world truly make life so down an blue.The whole,thing is a first grade work.Period.