she sits in her room
the wall of pain keeps getting taller
the ocean of sadness is rising
she still sits there
she thinks
she tries to to forget everything
but more memories keep entering her mind
like ants enter into an anthole
one by one.
thoughts and memories
haunting her
she cant take it anymore
so she breaks
like a glass falling on the floor
and shatters
she shatters...into tears
she cant stop crying
she cant stop hurting
she just wants it to end
and thats when she opens the box..
the little wooden box under her bed
she takes out the blade
and she presses it to her skin...
right on her wrist...where the veins are..
the veins that carry the blood that keeps her alive
that keep the pain alive..
the same blood that she had when she was hurt..
the same blood that she had when she was smilling..
and the blood that she has now
the body that is full of pain..sadness
and she cuts...and cuts untill she stops crying
but not deep enough..
she isnt that strong
so she just..
stops...
2007-05-28 06:17:26 · 14 answers · asked by meat 3 in Health ➔ Mental Health
good poem
2007-05-28 06:19:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my what an emotionally deep poem. Such a soul looking for relief from all the sadness filling her life. I hope that is not the way you are feeling on the inside. Happiness can be found. Talking with others really does help to let that pain out. Don't give up hope in finding the help needed. If this just merely a poetry piece that you've written...so dark and so moving...it really shows what the pain does to one's own soul, when it is bottled up inside.
2007-05-28 07:00:26 · answer #2 · answered by Tarlyng 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if its a poem I like it. If your really having these problems you need to understand they are more common that you might know. Seek treatment, the help is out there you just have to reach out for it. This is a major depression issue and it can be controlled with meds and therapy and life can continue in a much better state of mind.
Good Luck to you.
2007-05-28 06:24:05 · answer #3 · answered by ncgirl 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You seem to be in need of psychiatric help, so I strongly urge you to talk to a mental health professional about your problems. You're in my prayers, Good Luck.
2007-05-28 06:25:42 · answer #4 · answered by Mike M. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have never understood self-harm or suicide. So many people live with far worse problems than you, and infinitely more have died kicking and screaming way before their time when they did not want to.
You have mental health problems and if you do nothing else in your life, admit it and seek psychiatric assistance.
2007-05-28 06:22:42 · answer #5 · answered by steven b 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
the answer to this is don't be so selfish start to help others and you will find purpose in your life. To kill oneself is the height of narcissim and selfishness. Believe me there are people out there that need real help and you can be one that can bring real blessings to them and by doing so will bring real blessings to yourself
2007-05-28 06:23:26 · answer #6 · answered by scan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a great poem. I just hope it isn't from personal expeirence... Gods not ready for yet honey!
2007-05-28 09:45:43 · answer #7 · answered by amylr620 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice....
very emotional and strong
it really gets me
but don't do anything like it, it'll be the biggest mistake of your life once you realize how many people care
2007-05-28 06:20:07 · answer #8 · answered by sally b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dont hurt yourself , u r special to so many people .
2007-05-28 06:19:35 · answer #9 · answered by David K 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very sad and she needs help, before it is too late.
2007-05-28 06:20:52 · answer #10 · answered by JQ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If this is really how you feel, then you need to speak to someone... pronto !!!
I don't think you'll get the best replies to this.......
2007-05-28 06:20:58 · answer #11 · answered by M.O. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋