Home At Last
Home at last
The hurt is all gone
The pain is in the past
and my soul is free to roam
Home at last
a beautiful mansion I see
Glory in it's vast
as I see Jesus standing next to me
The angels are singing
Songs of glory and love
Bells everywhere are ringing
Glory to God up above
Behold the light
The love is so strong
My soul is in flight
This is where I know I belong
No more pain
No more tears
No more rain
Because God takes away all of my fears
I see my family
This is really such a treat
Angels all around me
And I am at my Fathers feet
Do not cry
Please do not weep
For I didnt die
I am only asleep
I had to go away
Because there is much work to be done
I walk with Jesus all day
This is the greatest fun
Do not forget me
And I will not forget you
Be happy, the Lord has set me free
and the love I feel is so warm and true
You will see me again
I am saving you a place
The pain didn't win
because God let me win this race
The pain is all gone
I'm always next to your heart
Thank you God for taking me home
And to my family, we are never far apart
I had to go away
The pain was coming too fast
I am with you every day
But for now I am home at last
2007-05-26 07:16:00 · 12 answers · asked by flawless1212 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Nice. I wish I could write like that.
2007-05-26 07:19:03 · answer #1 · answered by Gorgeoustxwoman2013 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful.
2007-05-26 14:19:44 · answer #2 · answered by gwhiz1052 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Strictly speaking in a literary sense it's very good. Religion wise, I don't believe a bit of it.
2007-05-26 14:34:03 · answer #3 · answered by Becca 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really beautiful and so true. when we are there with God and Christ all the pain is gonna go away.
2007-05-26 14:19:44 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is pretty, just as long as you realize that it is not truth. Eccl. tells us that the dead know nothing. But you are a good writer and your poem is good.
2007-05-26 14:22:22 · answer #5 · answered by GraycieLee 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Very nice.
2007-05-26 14:24:56 · answer #6 · answered by NONAME 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very pretty, Allison....I really liked your poem too. Very nice.
2007-05-26 14:21:47 · answer #7 · answered by bonsai bobby 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is awesome because it came from your heart.
2007-05-26 14:25:16 · answer #8 · answered by Julian 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful...post it on peotry.com for more reviews. that is where I have put mine.
2007-05-26 14:24:24 · answer #9 · answered by mrsbsy06 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a bit far fetched.
2007-05-26 14:20:01 · answer #10 · answered by Afi 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋