I wrote this poem..what do you think?It's called I Hate
I hate the way you look at me, I hate your goregeous eyes
I hate the way you talk to me i hate your stupid lies,
I hate the way you love her and the way she loves you. I hate how you said forever and now we're done and through but most of all i hate the way i love you.
2007-05-23 12:34:45 · 9 answers · asked by R 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
If it sounds like another poem im really sorry i didnt mean to like copy it or anything i was just mad so i wrote the poem.
2007-05-23 12:45:26 · update #1
Sounds pretty good to me..... But dear, I hope this isn't about you, if so, you need to let go.... I promise if you do, you will find that special person..
2007-05-23 12:38:51 · answer #1 · answered by christy s 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's a fabulous way of copying 'Ten things I hate about you.' NOT
you didn't come up eith that subject and ryhme on ur own. nice try but next actually do the work
2007-05-23 19:38:38 · answer #2 · answered by Neelie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sort of, may wanna omit the last part if you plan on using it as a revence stanza. Cause it shows your desparation
2007-05-23 19:37:50 · answer #3 · answered by ChAtMaN 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its tells me you HATE HATE HATE.. other than that ..not alot ..sorry!
2007-05-23 19:38:24 · answer #4 · answered by mad c 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
everyone watched tht movie.....
nice reincarnation of it tho...
2007-05-23 19:38:06 · answer #5 · answered by mai 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it!!
2007-05-23 19:38:05 · answer #6 · answered by dshultz1012 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's been done.
2007-05-23 19:37:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
plagerism....loser
2007-05-23 19:38:09 · answer #8 · answered by yankhater 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good.
2007-05-23 19:37:44 · answer #9 · answered by kimm24seven 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋