My love is graduating.. And I want to write her a letter, but my grammar is not that good. I know what to say, but on this particular part, i get stuck "In between all the identical caps and gowns, there'll be an individual that holds my heart " I want to say that she's soo special and means the world to me. Any suggestions?
Please help me with that phrase. Thank you
2007-05-23 04:43:59 · 16 answers · asked by Richard j 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
amongst all the caps and gowns, there is one who wears it best, not only because she's accomplished her goal, but because she's managed to capture my heart.
2007-05-23 04:48:32 · answer #1 · answered by mrs sexy pants 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you've made a good start with the simple, but clear phrase "You are so special and you mean the world to me."
That sounds like something one would want to hear.
If you want to talk about the identical caps and gowns, however, I'd suggest:
"Among those in the identical caps and gowns is one special person who holds my heart."
"Between" is used when there are two items. Look carefully and you'll see a form of "two" right there in the word. "Among" is used when there are more than two.
2007-05-23 04:50:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
In between all the identical caps and gowns, there'll be an individual that holds my heart different from the rest for when she smiles the room does glow i will never let you go.
2007-05-23 04:47:58 · answer #3 · answered by mandella 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think what you said/wrote sounds great. But if it doesnt work for you, try re-phrasing it, like "In between all the identical caps and gowns, there'll be one that stands out in the crowd" or something like that..
2007-05-23 04:48:51 · answer #4 · answered by junebuggie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try using the word "among" instead of "in between".
How about this "Among all the identical caps and gowns, there is one individual who stands above the rest - the one that holds my heart." And then list some special things about her that you love. "The one whose face lights up when she smiles, the one who makes me feel like I'm on top of the world..." stuff like that.
Good luck!
2007-05-23 04:51:12 · answer #5 · answered by anonevyl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Among that great mass of caps and gowns, there is one head which turns my head and one heart which beats in unison with mine.
2007-05-23 04:48:13 · answer #6 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you could say Your are more special than I can find the words to describe and you mean the world to me.
Words from the heart are the best no matter how they come out
2007-05-23 04:47:59 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't really think she will care about your grammar. As long as it comes from your heart. The fact that you are so worried about it she will know that you are very sincere.
2007-05-23 04:50:23 · answer #8 · answered by Alicia M 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd switch "in between" to "among". Otherwise, it sounds good--very sweet!
2007-05-23 04:47:39 · answer #9 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That sounds great in itself!
How sweet! Maybe include how proud of her you are.
2007-05-23 04:46:46 · answer #10 · answered by batmantis1999 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋