keep me warm like Im suppose to be
love me with all your might and all intense
intwinted together lika a chain linked fence
Hold me..caress me
leaving my heart in your hands to be
wishing you were mine..
shutting out everything but you and me..in the late sunshine
Hold me..tease me..
Giving me your hand in my hand as it should be
In bed and having that someone to hold
Keeping the love and me out of cold
Hold me..love me..
Love you so..Never letting you go
The way you make me feel is irreplaceable
This is where I will stay within your arms
Just hold me..
2007-05-23 01:27:05 · 25 answers · asked by G?ld?n ang?l 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i love it thank u angel. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
honey be safe love u xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
2007-05-23 02:01:31 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 4⤋
7 out of 10.
2007-05-23 08:31:47 · answer #2 · answered by phyco bunny 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'd give it a 2 or 3 out of 10. BECAUSE: It's very cliched and very simplistic. It could do with a lot more metaphors and word play!
2007-05-23 08:30:09 · answer #3 · answered by Lithium 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The subject is good! Being in love is great!
2007-05-23 08:30:08 · answer #4 · answered by madbaldscotsman 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 9, I like it, you did a great job, i can't write poetry for nothing so for someone to sit down and write something is beautiful is awesome......be proud of yourself, i love it.....
2007-05-23 08:30:16 · answer #5 · answered by Nita and Michael 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's really sweet!!! I don't have any talent for writing, so my rating is really worth nothing but....10 out of 10. I liked it.
2007-05-23 09:12:18 · answer #6 · answered by jade j 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's great 100% A
2007-05-23 08:30:24 · answer #7 · answered by kind1 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
really wonderful poem made me fly with my dreams
i give it 10 of 10
2007-05-23 12:03:30 · answer #8 · answered by micho 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think everything you can write thinking in someone else is beautiful because you are showing your feelings in the words.... this poem reflects your sentiments so it is stupendous!!!!
2007-05-23 08:32:11 · answer #9 · answered by staytrue 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's good but the end could be a little more reflective of teh poem like "just love me" or something
2007-05-23 08:30:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'm sure it's from the heart and your lover might appreciate it. But, I would not give up my day job!
2007-05-23 08:29:46 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋