Hi everyone! You guys out there doing great job, I must say. Got one more question, though.
Could you please correct these sentences if they are wrong and give an alternative keeping the meaning og the original:
1st sentence: The earth is getting smaller and smaller as the number of people becomes bigger and bigger.
2nd: The primary reason(for the increase in the life expectancy) is the development of medical technique
3rd: Less labors and stresses can multiply the human longevity.
4th: People say our generations can live up to 120.
5th: I can't estimate the limitations of human faculty.
Please don't try to find a mistake for teh sake of finding one. If the sentence makes sense and grammatically OK, then just leave it. Thanks a lot in advance.
2007-05-21 01:31:15 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
For starters, it is English native SPEAKERS, not English natives. Natives can mean as being a member of the original inhabitants of a particular place.
1st: The Earth is getting smaller day by day as the number of its inhabitants increases.
2nd: Advances in medicine as well as medical research are the primary reasons for the increase in human life expectancy.
3rd: Less work & stress can contribute to longer life expectancy in individuals.
4th: Scientists (or geneticists) predict that people born in this generation can now live up to 120 years old.
5th: The limitation of __________*cannot be estimated.
* what do you mean by human faculty? Is it abilities? Faculty is defined as an inherent power or ability or any of the powers or capacities possessed by the human mind. From my view, faculty is not the right word as the 1st four sentences talk about population and human mortality factors.
2007-05-21 06:52:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 0⤋
1st sentence: The earth is becoming smaller and smaller as the number of people becomes increasingly greater.
2nd: The primary reason(for the increase in the life expectancy) is the development of medical techniques.
3rd: A reduction in work and stress can increase human longevity.
4th: People say that our generation can live to up to 120 years.
5th: I can't estimate the limitations of human faculties.
2007-05-21 02:02:22 · answer #2 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
It's said, "Native English Speaker."
2016-05-18 21:52:02 · answer #3 · answered by trisha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1) The earth is getting smaller as the population becomes greater.
2)fine the way it is
3)Less labor and stress can multiply human longevity.
4)It is said that our generation may live up to 120 years.
5)fine the way it is
2007-05-21 01:41:04 · answer #4 · answered by nowyouknow 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
4th: People say our generation can live up to the age of 120 years old.
2007-05-21 01:41:26 · answer #5 · answered by 光 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
the first sentence: change becomes to is becoming, as u used is getting. (for example, do u say: I want to clean my room, and to study, and then cleaning. Cleaning is wrong)
2nd: why are there ()??? u should add an "s" to technique,,, techniques.
5th: of the human faculty, add the.
2007-05-21 02:21:27 · answer #6 · answered by gggnm 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
you only spelled the wrong . and i think war is to unpopulate the earth, plus og is of.
2007-05-21 01:36:32 · answer #7 · answered by freeflow 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋