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1. My mother always cuddle me when i am sad or "when i feel sad".
2.The earthworm is a slimy creature or "an earthworm" and "creature" is right word or not.
3.Roote penetrate in the soil to absorb water for the plant or "roots penetrate into the soil and absorb water for the plant".
4.Nobody guessed the number of stars in the sky or"No one guessed"
5.The police officer took a glimpse at some of the criminals.
please ,help me and chech the sentences according to grammar if any correction needs please change the sentence but the sense of the sentence remain the same.i'm preparing for my test and don't want any risk in losing any mark.send correction urgently.

2007-05-19 21:16:51 · 9 answers · asked by sameen_sohail2000 1 in Society & Culture Languages

9 answers

1. My mother always cuddles me when I am sad. ("When I feel sad" is fine too.)
2. The earthworm is a slimy creature/ An earthworm is a slimy creature. (Either is fine.)
3. ("The" is optional here) Roots penetrate into the soil and abosrb water for the plant. (This sentence would be appropriate if you were continuing to discribe a plant. If it is the first time the plant was mentioned, you might want to change the sentence to "A plant's roots penetrate into the soil and absord water.")
4. Either "No one" or "nobody" is fine.
5. This sentence is fine as well.

2007-05-19 21:24:24 · answer #1 · answered by mary jane 3 · 4 0

1. My mother always cuddles me when i feel sad.
2.The earthworm is a slimy animal.
3. Roots penetrate the soil to absorb water for the plant.
4. No one has guessed the number of stars in the sky.
5.The police officer glimpsed at some of the criminals.

2007-05-19 21:29:13 · answer #2 · answered by Ad3r R 2 · 1 1

1. My mother always cuddles me when I feel sad.
2. The earthworm is a slimy creature. (Saying 'an' seems to refer to all earthworms; saying 'the' seems to refer to only one specific earthworm--so it depends on what you want to convey.)
3. Roots penetrate the soil to absorb water for the plant. (or Roots penetrate soil to absorb water for the plant.)
4. No one guessed the number of stars in the sky.
5. The police officer took a glance at some of the criminals. (or The police officer took a look at the criminals.) could also be options. Glimpse works too.

2007-05-19 21:28:17 · answer #3 · answered by blooming chamomile 6 · 1 0

1. My mother always cuddles me when i FEEL sad.
2.The earthworm is a slimy creature.
3.Roote penetrate the soil to absorb water for the plant
4.Nobody guessed the number of stars in the sky. OR "nobody could guess"
5.The police officer took a LOOK at some of the criminals. OR 'shot a glimpse'

2007-05-19 21:21:08 · answer #4 · answered by Giselle J 2 · 0 4

1. When I feel sad; 2. The earthworm; 3. Roots; 4. No one; 5. ?

2007-05-19 21:23:00 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

My mother always cuddle me when I feel sad.
The earthworn is an slimmy creature.
Roots of the plant penetrate through the soil in order to absorb water
No one can guess the numbers of the stars from the sky

jtm

2007-05-19 21:30:59 · answer #6 · answered by Jesus M 7 · 0 2

Okay. You have received many different answers. The only one I completely agree with (and I am very smart) is the answer Mary J gave. So be that as it may.....

2007-05-19 22:25:45 · answer #7 · answered by coopersmima 3 · 1 0

#1 is fine either way, but "cuddle" needs to be "cuddles"

#2 either way is fine, and yes creature is fine

#3 I like the 2nd way better

#4 Either way is good

#5 is fine.

2007-05-19 21:23:58 · answer #8 · answered by mom of 2 3 · 0 1

1. either way is okay. same for 2.
Roots, not "roote."
4. both ways are okay.
5. okay.

Giselle, why did you put "roote"? That's wrong.

2007-05-19 22:47:03 · answer #9 · answered by supertop 7 · 0 1

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