Men- in Egypt the men thought that they were smarter then women well i have new for them!I am Hypatia. The first noted women in mathematics, asronomy, and philosopy. My father was the wonderful Theon! He taught me everything he knew. For example he taught me how to detect where the constellations were and mathematical therory.I was born in Alexandera,Egypt. And died there when i was sixty, that was old back then. Do you know what really pushes my buttons? I got murdered because i was a women and a non-Christian, that didnt go to well with them. Then i was murdered by a mob of Christians! All that teaching and learing was gone in a moment!
2007-05-19 14:36:37 · 8 answers · asked by ♥KeLsEy♥ 4 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
the title got cut off and its about Hypatia pronounced hi-pay-she-ah! just saying and i know i was in a hurry with the spelling.
2007-05-19 15:26:06 · update #1
Fantastic! Once you get the spelling and that stuff sorted, it will be absolutely tops.
One suggestion, where you say 'He taught me everything I knew', you could change it to "From him, I learned everything I knew', it is a more active construction and shows that she participated in the process to the same extent as he did.
Good luck with your speech, I learned something new just by reading it, so thanks :-)
2007-05-19 14:43:29 · answer #1 · answered by thing55000 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
interesting. Do you know that Jehovah's Witnesses do not believe in war and are non-violent Christians. J.W.'s refuse to enter the military or anything that might kill or cause injury to someone els. So if you were mobbed and killed by a group of Christians, it was NOT the J.W.'s. Those who live by the sword will perish by the sword. That's what Jesus Christ said. And also it says in the Bible that his true followers would learn war no more. www.jw-media.org . There are articles on J.W.'s getting prosecuted for refusing military service.
2007-05-19 14:44:44 · answer #2 · answered by Melissa Y 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
If you are giving this speech you should take out the bit that says you are smarter than men
2007-05-19 14:43:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Tidy up the grammar a little bit and you have a winner! Go girl!
2007-05-19 14:40:00 · answer #4 · answered by teetzijo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try rewriting it grammatically and removing the jargon. You can only be murdered once, you have yourself being murdered twice.
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2007-05-19 14:44:14 · answer #5 · answered by tentofield 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good, possibly a bit short, and you must clean your grammar up a little bit, but you have a good speach there.
2007-05-19 14:42:25 · answer #6 · answered by Ethernaut 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you certainly weren't the first noted woman in spelling I can tell that much
2007-05-19 14:41:47 · answer #7 · answered by Joe 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no it makes very little sense and barely sounds self-serving try again
2007-05-19 14:40:41 · answer #8 · answered by JOHN 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋