The thorns that are your crown
remind me of the grim day
you died....
Why call it good friday
when all I see is your pain
as you take my burden
away from me....
I would gladly take it to save you from that pain
but since you already came and conqured the
death and hell..
I all can give to repay you is my heart.
So what do you think?
2007-05-19 11:35:09 · 12 answers · asked by Bookworm101 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Semper you have talent and thank you!
2007-05-19 11:44:14 · update #1
Here's what I think:
God Almighty has Blessed you with a pen.
So all your love won't be held in.
Instead it will seed many hearts that need,
A little grace and mercy,
Our souls must feed.
Go in peace and God Bless and Anoint your poems!
2007-05-19 11:42:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
as a person with a religion which isn't completely stable in my mind yet, I am moved by you poetry, a little simple...true,...but sometimes the basics can become the most elaborate myriad of ideals and values that people can put on paper.
I love this poetry.
please continue your work, and maybe you'll find my path as you make your way to him, but so you know, jesus will hand you your heart back, and only ask that he walks with you.
2007-05-19 19:18:47 · answer #2 · answered by it's National Security 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a decent enough trade, since that's all Jesus asks of you. :)
2007-05-19 18:39:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋
Very good!!
2007-05-19 21:02:12 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
*Yawn*
Writing love poetry to Jesus is akin to writing poetry to a dead person to mark the anniversary of their death and then having it printed in the newspaper.
Pointless.
2007-05-19 18:40:20 · answer #5 · answered by ReeRee 6 · 0⤊ 5⤋
That is so beautiful!
That honestly brought tears to my eyes.
Save it! Give it to your church and share it!
2007-05-19 18:37:59 · answer #6 · answered by lovingfeathers 3 · 4⤊ 2⤋
i think it is gorgeous did you make it either way i love it
2007-05-19 18:38:22 · answer #7 · answered by lilfairyneeyore 2 · 2⤊ 2⤋
That's very good :)
2007-05-19 18:37:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
its ok
2007-05-19 19:38:45 · answer #9 · answered by datrealma06 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's great. i like it!!
2007-05-19 19:00:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋