Behing thode brown eyez lies compassion. An he wouldn't deny her of his heart in any way or fashion. He lavishes her with gifts because he feels she deserves it. But in reality she's taking advantage.
She don't realize what's behind those brown eyes and I try not to judge They say love is blind. Rather than see the truth, Brotha'd rather live the lie. Even though it's a shame, It's a fact of life.
Now I don't speak these words to say that I'm a better person. However, my words are to let you know I care for you and as a friend I don't want to see you hurtin.
Behind those brown eyez lies compassion. An he wouldn't deny her of his heart in any way or fashion. He lavishes her with expensive gifts because he feels she deserves it. But in reality she's taking advantage.
Brotha cut so clean, he don't even realize that he's bleeding. In love with a girl used to lyin and decieving Needing to have it her way. She uses you for personal gain. An it nearly brings me to tears .
2007-05-18 09:48:44 · 15 answers · asked by Sol is Real 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Not too shabby...I'd stay with either the third person or the 1st tho, not both, either talking about someone else or yourself.
Rate? Well for me depends on what music will go with the lyrics...if country and western, the words would be fine but not my thing so perhaps a 6
Pop/Rock: perhaps a 7.5
Alternative: about the same 7.5
Heavy Rock: 8 - 9 with a good drummer and guitarist for a bit of solo-ization
Might even work for happy hardcore, trance perhaps...again 8-9
Think it might work...good luck (Copyright this if it's your personal work...like now!)
2007-05-18 09:59:47 · answer #1 · answered by dustiiart 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5/10
2007-05-18 16:51:07 · answer #2 · answered by Antoine J 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds more like you're talking to someone about a bad person. Doesn't work for me as a song. Sorry. That's just my opinion, and no one else's. â¥
2007-05-18 16:51:44 · answer #3 · answered by The Nana of Nana's 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well. by lyrics, and not grammer or stuff, id give it an 8-9.5, it all depends on the rhythm and tune you'd use with. the one i used made it sound very good, like there was much emotion.
2007-05-18 16:55:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice<3
2007-05-18 16:55:46 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Take two aspirin, sleep, look at this again in the morning, and get over the girl.
2007-05-18 16:52:10 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would rate it a 7. If you don't mind a suggestion, I would delete this question. If it's not copyrighted, anyone could steal it.
2007-05-18 16:58:08 · answer #7 · answered by fruit salad 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's hard to tell because i don't know what the beat and rhythm is, but I can tell that it is a very passionate song.
2007-05-18 16:52:01 · answer #8 · answered by Qu'est ce que tu penses? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's pretty good. I'm sure it would be better if I heard music with it but the words are good.
2007-05-18 16:54:40 · answer #9 · answered by AidansMa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a bucking floody mess mate!
2007-05-18 16:51:30 · answer #10 · answered by Parercut Faint 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋