I made some alterations based on what people said. Do you guys have any more advice for me?
The new one is the second recording, titled "In the End II"
I really appreciate any advice guys, I really want to make it better and I'm too shy to show it to people I really know. Thanks :)
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2007-05-13 16:02:25 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Performing Arts
The song is good and you have a great voice. A clean recording would boost everything. It seems you're still a little uncomfortable with playing guitar and singing at the same time. Maybe if you could record both seperately somehow it would work fine. Otherwise you really have something there. Any more songs from you?
2007-05-14 16:37:43 · answer #1 · answered by Eric L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you need to somehow improve the way you record yourself. The guitar part is a lot louder than the vocal, which is too quiet to even hear.
Good luck!
2007-05-14 00:49:44 · answer #2 · answered by jellybeanchick 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all....you are adorable.....LOL!
Second of all....make sure the guitar is in tune, I think you may have been a little off.
Third of all.....the vocals could be louder.
Fourth of all.....the guitarchords need to be a little less choppy...
thankyou and have a nice day.
2007-05-13 23:10:04 · answer #3 · answered by ipolkadot 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think u should sing louder cause i cant even hear you
2007-05-13 23:05:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋