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if anyone could right one for me that would be great!!! please dont use when by a famous poet make up ur own. im suppose to right a modern day poem meaning it dosent have to ryhme well i suck at poems and a short lil decent poem that someone could make up would be great!! thanks!

2007-05-12 20:11:25 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

yeah i kno who 50 cent is. lmao poems r fuckiin gaay!! and no im sure none of the poems u ppl will say r goin to be a hit lmao

2007-05-12 20:18:05 · update #1

ay i wasent bein rude i was jus sayin

i appreciate everyone thats doin this for me. and if i could write a poem i would....i cant tho

2007-05-12 20:27:47 · update #2

12 answers

my days grow darker
i cannot think of an answer
i seek help
but none want to help
i feel sad
doing this may be bad
i cant help it
i like doing this

2007-05-13 01:54:03 · answer #1 · answered by FARAH 2 · 0 0

Actually I've had a few of my poems published...but it wouldn't really belong to you if someone else wrote it for you. It doesn't have to sound like Sylvia Plath or Robert Lowell or Billy Collins, just write something that interests you. Remember these words: Show don't tell. Don't tell the person what you're writing; SHOW it to them.

A modern day poem is also called "freeverse." Walt Whitman wrote one of the first poets to write freeverse poetry.

Besides, why would I write a poem for you if you're going to be rude about it?

P.S.-I'm sure you could write something, you just have to try. :) Poems are hard at first but they get easier the more you write them. I've been writing for ten years now and it gets easier every time I write a new poem.

2007-05-12 20:21:16 · answer #2 · answered by poeticjustice 6 · 0 1

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2016-10-15 12:55:17 · answer #3 · answered by eidemiller 4 · 0 0

a taste
like a standard
is supposed to
learn like it matters
so the man with more air
inside the shell
tells a story that
needs to be done before the school bell
I and stop by feeling swell
and I smile as I tell him
the direction to hell
first you walk
and you get a cell
so you talk
and as you make your banter
you don't notice the bus
that will make your entire body into mush
and then you tell saint peters the secret password
I belive it's "up yours"
and he'll show you the back door
to the lower floor!

2007-05-12 20:42:29 · answer #4 · answered by it's National Security 4 · 0 1

YOUR SMILE, YOUR TOUCH, YOUR HEART


Your smile awakens my soul,
As the sun awakens the day.
A kiss and my life is yours,
It seems a fair price to pay.
Your touch arouses my senses,
As the moon arouses the night.
Hold me and win me forever,
In your arms all things are right.
Your heart endures all emotion,
As the sky endures all the stars.
Love me and we'll have eternity,
There is no greater love than ours.

-Shubhanshu

2007-05-12 21:51:59 · answer #5 · answered by Vegan 2 · 0 0

I need help writing a poem
'Cause I'm so busy doing something in my room
Suddenly, I hear a loud boom
Thinking the world is in doom


Wow... I just wrote that in less than 30 sec.

2007-05-12 20:15:36 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

SHE CRIES

Drops fall; she sits
Clouds crash; she stares
The rain falls on the pavement; she loses her strength
She fights this feeling with happy music and funny friends;
But, like the rain, the feeling always returns
She would give anything to feel those arms around her
This lonely feeling would evaporate into pure happiness
But she sits; drops fall
She stares; clouds crash
She loses her strength; rain falls on the pavement
She cries.
Alone.
She cries.

2007-05-12 20:18:16 · answer #7 · answered by Lauren H 1 · 0 1

just write what comes from the heart- deep down in ure soul -just let the words flow onto paper.... like here's one from me right now

blue lights flash in the distance, bright hot blue
in space nothing but you.

see it doesn't make sense but it's a start.

2007-05-12 20:16:10 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

lol... aight l

life

everyday i open my eyes and realize i am still alive.

I lift my head and get out of bed to give life one more try.

to the shower i go, any hot water dont know if not ill cry.

ahh hot water at last next is to math whair ill dream of the girl from american pie.

the class is over and there she is trying to get to her next class on time...

2007-05-12 20:22:06 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

Why are we at war?
We all yell no more no more!!
Still our men are sent to die...
While I see the whole nation cry.

This is without a doubt modern day..hope you like it..I wrote this just now, from my heart!
Ciao!

2007-05-12 20:17:40 · answer #10 · answered by bodacious baby 7 · 1 2

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