I need help making a poem about pain, I need ideas and stuff that ryhmes that would fit in a poem about pain, I already did one poem about love, now im doing one about pain, and I need a third topic, that kind of is like those. Please help
2007-05-12 14:53:05 · 8 answers · asked by »ŘªīńВŏŵ•Öf•Ρřįđę« 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It does need to ryhme, it's for a school project.
2007-05-12 15:44:12 · update #1
I am sitting here
wishing you were near
My heart trobs in pain
Tears start to rain
My brain is about to burst
Only thoughts about the worst
Help me dig out of this endless hole
With all this pain, my life has no soul.
I just came up with this, let me know what you think.
2007-05-12 15:02:02 · answer #1 · answered by Dime a Dozen 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ok, um, i've written bunches of poems on pain, but ur question is vauge, and can't be propperly answered, considering the fact the power should come from you, not answers, and what kind of pain, there are millions, and it doesn't need to ryme, some of the best poems with the most meaning and flow are freeverse, but i guess, um, physical pain? that's what i'm familiar with. blood and mental anguish??? ^_^ just start writng and it'll come!
2007-05-12 22:32:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about sorrow for the third topic? Or happiness?
As for pain, I go along with John Lennon's explanation - God is a concept by which we measure our pain. Pax - C
2007-05-12 22:29:29 · answer #3 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pain is a good word. You've got rain, stain, pane(as in window pane), main. But does it really have to rhyme?
Poetry is a vehicle of expression. Is there something that you're hurting about. Focus on that as you write. Let the feeling out.
2007-05-12 22:05:01 · answer #4 · answered by jsardi56 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pain why do you hurt me so
how could you be so mean, how could you stoop so low?
I never would have treated you this way.
you thrive off of my misery and dismay
Where i give you life, you take life away
pain why are you here?
why do you always stick by my side?
you tell me that everything will be alright,
but behind you snicker at my gloomy days and nights.
that's all i have....
2007-05-12 22:19:26 · answer #5 · answered by Nicole 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For your third topic, how about you try to tackle redemption. That would make a nice trilogy..love, pain and redemption.
2007-05-12 22:02:14 · answer #6 · answered by Contessa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
when u write a poem, its supposed to come from ur heart...not ours.
jus start writin, and it'll come to ya.
2007-05-12 22:00:57 · answer #7 · answered by jaz 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
have nown
2007-05-12 22:00:37 · answer #8 · answered by Please 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋