This was not given in defiance of any rule or law; only as a chester of lending a helping hand to some in need. I am a writer and a poet; have been all my life. Sharing ones thoughts; raw as they can be, can be an undeniable source of knowledge where in one may greatly benifit from. It's a great tool for relating to other's in a similar situation. So I put it out there and I hope it was of some use to someone. If you can relate to it's meaning, let me know?
2007-05-12 10:47:38 · 5 answers · asked by ? 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Did you write this? Anyway...
I don't know the word "chester." So that immediately complicated it for me. (And no, I didn't look it up.)
It was a little difficult for me to relate to this. I think part of the reason was you didn't put it into stanzas. It was like a run-on sentence (which I am pretty sure u didn't intend.) I would like to suggest you take this and put it into stanzas and then read it out loud.
I did catch some rhyme scheme but with stanzas, that also would be more clear.
I hope this helps. I think I could relate to it better if you ordered it the way I suggested.
In any event, pls. keep writing. Writing helps the writer.
2007-05-17 17:46:30 · answer #1 · answered by margot 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Though I can relate to what you are trying to convey in your poem, your poem itself is 'rough' keep working and reworking it, not in meaning but in the form your message takes.
Poetry is a wonderful too, I encourage you to keep writing.
2007-05-20 13:03:27 · answer #2 · answered by jentheredwench 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like the idea of sharing thoughts. that's the mark of positive thinking.
2007-05-19 05:37:38 · answer #3 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay...Keeping writing way.. Practices makes perfect
You decide if you can be .
2007-05-18 17:00:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is good
2007-05-14 22:10:08 · answer #5 · answered by Hootie J 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋