Motherhood
(From The Baby's Perspective)
I left Heaven and went swimming,
In the depths of another soul.
I was wrapped within my own little world,
with no understanding of what would unfold.
I was concieved out of Love,
And Lovely was the voice she spoke with.
Eventhough I was in the womb,
Her voice was like a kiss, no,
A song, no
I have no words.
Yet it was like being on a lake in the morning,
And waking to the call of one bird.
Not just any bird,
But one of splendor and of grace.
And before I could finish the dream,
The water was gone,
I took a breath,
And I saw your Beautiful face.
And I've loved you ever since.
With every part of me that's apart of YOU!
Happy Mother's Day, Ma.
Welcome to Motherhood.
2007-05-12 09:44:44 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Ladylynn, I wrote it write before sending it. Thank You for your kind words!
2007-05-12 09:59:51 · update #1
Thank You Hot CoCo! There will be more, God Willing.
2007-05-12 10:26:13 · update #2
blondesweetsassy, my heart goes out to you. I too have lost someone dear to me at birth. My first two Grandchildren were stillborn. I take comfort in knowing they are around God's Throne at this very moment and forever. Your Son is there also. God Bless You With A Special Mother's Day!
2007-05-12 12:22:33 · update #3
That is a very precious and wonderful poem to share. Thank you so much for sharing this, as I lost my son to SIDS when he was 27 days old. I never got to spend a mother's day with him, or hear him say I love you. You said it for him, thank you. I never thought of what it was like for him, and this gave me an all new blessed way to see.
What a sweet and generous person you are semprefidelis.
I know that your mother is so proud of you.
God Bless You!
2007-05-12 12:15:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!
2007-05-12 09:47:15 · answer #2 · answered by benemma1802 1 · 3⤊ 0⤋
That was sooooooo beautiful!!!!!! I almost cried! Thank You very much for that! I'll bet your mom is the best in the world. I know mine was.
To All The Mother's, God Bless You.
2007-05-12 09:55:05 · answer #3 · answered by Brilliant 1forHIM 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
You should've warned me to get out the Kleenex. That was so beautiful. Who wrote it? If it was you, I think you have a career ahead of you. I'm 4 months along with my first. Maybe that's why I'm so emotional. No, I think I would've cried no matter what. Thanks for passing that on.
2007-05-12 09:54:32 · answer #4 · answered by LadyLynn 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Thank you from women like me who have no children but are Mothers to the Earth. We count too.
2007-05-12 11:52:06 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! Heh, made my eyes a little watery. I think that basically made my day. And yes, keep 'em coming!
2007-05-12 13:15:40 · answer #6 · answered by your wonderwall 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That was beautiful!
Thank You so much!
2007-05-12 09:47:47 · answer #7 · answered by dreandken 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
You can say it and thank you. After so much negativity on here, it is nice to see something positive. Thanks, from a mother and mother to be.
2007-05-12 15:03:16 · answer #8 · answered by 2fine4u 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
You are the Lord of the Plume! I can't get enough of your poetry. You are magnificent. **blink** **blink**
2007-05-12 10:10:23 · answer #9 · answered by Hot Coco Puff 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋