Rate this poem for me, please?

Question

I wrote this poem last week. I just wanted a few opinions on what people think of it. Please, no rude comments:)) It came from my heart.



The ABC's Of Our Lord


A is Almighty Lord from Above
B is for Beloved Son whom we love
C is for Christ who was Crucified on the Cross
D is how He Died to give hope to the lost
E is for Exalted with a love that never Ends
F is for Faith and Forever a Friend
G is for Goodness with a Great love
H is for Heaven way up above
I is I love you more ways then one
J is for Jesus and how He is God's Son
K is for Keeping Kindness in all that you do
L is for Love forever so true
M is for Mighty Message for all to hear
N is for Neverending love to hold you Near
O is for Ominent Father
P is for Praying for one another
Q is for Questions we ask every day
R is for Rest, we Receive after we pray
S is for Salvation from our Savior
T is for True love, despite our behavior
U is for an Understanding Lord
V is for Victory with a Valiant reward
W is for Wonderful Father from up above
X is for Xtra protection filled with love
Y is for Yearning for His Love until my life is complete
Z is for Zealous celebration in Zion so sweet

Answer 1

ABC's of Christianity?
Written quite well, and really very good

There's your rating....

Blessed Be

Answer 2

This poem is quite reliable for a newbie, there is defiantly some severe-high quality imagery in it, even though it styles of lacks direction, its somewhat difficult, it starts off off with you happy you have stumbled on somebody, yet they at the instant are not quite yours? and then they bypass away, that's a great storyline, yet you could want as an occasion a element interior the poem whilst they bypass away. It does not incredibly rhyme in places, which i do no longer blame you for, rhyming poems are very very complicated, so perhaps you could merely attempt non rhyming poems to start with. in case you like the assumption of rhyming nevertheless, attempt merely making it lyrical whilst spoken, counting the syllables according to line is a sturdy thank you to try this. Poetry could be relaxing and extremely pleasing, i think of you could proceed, you may additionally make some money! yet you could desire to purchase a e book on writing poetry to truly get the terrific effects, i opt to propose "the ode much less travelled: unlocking the poet interior" by Stephen Fry, he's astounding and and extremely exciting.

Answer 3

What makes you call it a poem? It's a alphabetical list. Maybe a list of great topics for someone to write poetry about. Your list is not even blank verse or accidental verse. It's not the least bit lyrical. At best, were you to remove all of the " is for " and use each capital letter only once, at the beginning of the line, you would have an Acrostic. And acrostics are technically poetry although they are rather dull in english and come out much better in certain other languages.

Answer 4

Okay rymes, lousy meter, what does Ominent mean, don't use crap like Xtra why don't you actually find a word that begins with X. Course the last line just makes me think of the rave in the matrix sequal.

Answer 5

super I give a rating u 8 for 10

Answer 6

That is really good. Oh and to Betty Boop... you need to reread your nursery rhymes... you poor thing, you got the last line of Mary had a little lamb wrong and YOU are giving poetic advice????

Answer 7

Great poem.. I see we still have the same old dissenters with us. Maybe they should read your poem again and try to get something out of it. It could change their lives.

Answer 8

That's really good and I'm glad it came from your heart, God bless you

Answer 9

It's lovely...good job

Answer 10

Great idea. I give you an A.