COME TO ME EARLY
Our Days on this earth
are only a few.
Like a drop in the ocean
so bright and so blue.
In our youth we look to the future
with dreams that's so bright.
Not really realizing
God keeps us always in sight.
He guides our path
with such a gentle hand.
Gives us the courage we need
to take our stand.
We shove that little voice aside
and say - "I have plenty of time."
God with His gentle patience says
"I'll wait - I don't mind."
As time slides on
and we daily stray,
God's gentle voice says
That's O.K. - I'll have my day."
When His hand
constantly brings us in line,
We look back and say
"I've wasted so much time."
Come to Me early
Our God pleads.
I have for you to plant
Many, Many seeds.
2007-05-11 14:37:47 · 40 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Nice...
2007-05-11 14:41:03 · answer #1 · answered by ManhattanGirl 5 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Well,I find it to be uplifting.You should write some more.Perhaps, next time you should write a poem about God's choice(It's God who choses us not us)read the Word you'll find out that God has already known who will be saved since before the creation of the world and since they were in their mother's womb and lastly it is by His grace that we are saved not by our ability.God bless you and Keep it up with a smile always.
2007-05-13 19:50:00 · answer #2 · answered by victor h 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice for a first poem. I also write poetry as well. Perhaps the English Teacher could give me a grade. She seemed critical of your first attempt.
I sincerely believe God is pleased and that is what really matters most. God bless you for your testimony in poetry.
C. R. Lord
2007-05-11 14:47:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice one.Claps.
John 3:16[kjv] For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.
so when we believe in JESUS we have eternal life.JESUS lived a sinless life and gave up his life as a sacrifice so we can be sin free. Ask JESUS to come into your heart and forgive ur sins and cleanse ur past with his blood.
With a simple prayer like above u can be saved.JESUS loves u and wants u to be saved.
2007-05-11 14:48:03 · answer #4 · answered by Emmanuel 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a great first poem. It has a rhymic pattern and it conveys a good message. I agree that the sooner we allow God into our lives, the better off we are. Think of all the great plans God has for us from the beginning. Yet we miss opportunities in our spiritual procrastination. Please, continue to write.
2007-05-11 14:47:13 · answer #5 · answered by ignoramus_the_great 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's so good!
Take it off the site before someone steals it and makes a copyright on it. I'm serious.
God bless you.<><
2007-05-12 02:18:21 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really beautiful!
The Lord works in mysterious ways,
What a wonderful way to bless this day. :)
2007-05-11 14:46:54 · answer #7 · answered by Heaven_Bound 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's amazing!It puts time in a whole new perspective,and shows God is a patience god.
2007-05-11 14:43:21 · answer #8 · answered by Bookworm101 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Excellent. Heart touching. Yo have a talent to write poems. Do continue to write.
2007-05-11 14:41:51 · answer #9 · answered by Tom 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good for a first Christian poem. You are a very talented young lady. Good message.
2007-05-11 14:43:01 · answer #10 · answered by Joyful Noise 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is a good poem and it describes what God is really like.
2007-05-11 14:59:19 · answer #11 · answered by Al M 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋