This is a letter that I just typed. I need to know if I should give it to him or not. So please tell me what you think.If you see any mistakes then let me know.
5/11/07
Taco Bell
John W.
Taco Bell
Dear John,
Hi this is your secret admirer; the reason I won’t tell you who I am is because you will probably just say no anyway. I want you to know that I adorer you and, I think about you all the time. I loss so much sleep trying to figure out a way to convince you to say yes to me. I want to tell you trust me, but not yet.
You’re smart, funny, and you also have a nice smile, I love to lesson to you talk. When I see your name on the hand washing sheet it’s like haven. Because I know you will be at work that day.
I would love to go out on a date with you. We can go out to eat. Maybe go to the movies then go to Balances Point. That is a pear in Tampa. I have always wanted to walk on the pear with a date. We also can go to the beach, and talk. There is so much we can do.
If you say no then I understand. We can be friends. I want to get to know you outside of work. If this sounds like something you would like to pursue let me know. Most likely you will find out who I am. Here’s a hint TALK TO ME! I always say that to you. One more for good measure BE ONE WITH THE STEAM TABLE. You will figure it out. Good luck
2007-05-10 19:25:31 · 10 answers · asked by Mary M 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Okay! Here comes editor.
1. "I adorer" to "I adore"
2. "I loss" to "I lost"
3. "to lesson" to "to listen"
4. "like haven" to "like heaven"
5. "...like haven. Because" to "...like heaven because"
6. "is a pear" to "is a pier"
7. "on the pear" to "on the pier"
8. "Here's a hint TALK TO ME! I always say that to you" to "Here's a hint: 'TALK TO ME!', I always say that to you"
9. "One more for good measure BE THE ONE WITH THE STEAM TABLE" to "One more for good measure, 'BE THE ONE WITH THE STEAM TABLE'."
And, lastly, I think you should give it to him. But if you can't say it to his face....I don't know where you are. Just own up to it.
2007-05-10 20:06:22 · answer #1 · answered by devilishangelgirl10 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
DELETE IT. It sounds a little creepy when you say, "When I see your name on the handwashing sheet it's like heaven..."
A much better approach would be to go up there when he's working and ask him what he's doing after work. Ask him if he wants to hang out or get something to eat. If he doesn't like you, then he'll say he's busy and won't offer to do it another time. However, if he's busy and says that you guys should get together some other time then he's interested. Writing a 'secret admirer' letter is something that 5th graders do. Be more mature and approach him, he won't be rude to you.
2007-05-10 19:35:04 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
NO, first of all cause the spelling is all wrong and second because it sounds like a letter a stalker would send you, kick back a bit, if you wanna get to know him just do it personally, letters are so last year, just find the right moments to talk to him, find out what he likes, for example sports team, and get tickets to a game and invite him, dont make it obvious though. just like say "oh i have an extra ticket to (whatever) are you gonna be bussy on that night? keep it simple.
2007-05-10 19:33:17 · answer #3 · answered by kchilian85 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes, but be sure you can handle his response. No matter how it goes you will prepare for any entanglements with people in the future. No secret about finding the right chemistry, time , luck and a willingness to risk rejection will pay off . Best of luck to you.
2007-05-10 19:38:41 · answer #4 · answered by flash gordon 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
skip the whole top part. Start here:
I wanted to get to know you outside of work. If this is ok with you then let me know.
end there
As a matter of fact, don't write a letter. Just find a similar interest you both have and invite him out.
2007-05-10 20:00:08 · answer #5 · answered by christie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Are you serious? You might just need a proofreader (lots of misspelled words, wrong choices of words, dangling sentences,wrong punctuation marks,etc). Don't type it; it's your personal letter to him so it should be in your own handwriting. Why should you wish him good luck when you are the one who's inviting him? And most importantly, just forget about sending the letter to him; you might turn him off.
2007-05-10 19:47:11 · answer #6 · answered by Basang Sisiw 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You've got an awful lot of typos that mess up the meaning.
"I adorer you"
"I loss so much sleep"
"lesson to you talk"
"it's like haven"
Fix those before you seriously consider sending it.
2007-05-10 19:30:25 · answer #7 · answered by Megan Klein 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Está visto que hoy me tocan las preguntas en inglés que no hablo. Alguien podía traducir.
2016-05-20 02:46:01 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't you think this is just a little childish?
If you do give it to him, at least fix the awful spelling and punctuation.
2007-05-10 19:31:04 · answer #9 · answered by Alice K 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I just want to cry now
2007-05-10 20:32:11 · answer #10 · answered by amee 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋