if u like rap, read this (10 pts)?

Question

im 14 years old and i want to be a rapper. i have 2 be able 2 expose my music to ppl, but i dont want 2 if it isnt good. so please listen to it and tell me a review for each of the 3 songs, and tell which is your fav. and why. i know i cant give every1 the 10 pts, so whoever has the most critisizm (good or bad) will get the 10 pts, also whoever writes a review for all songs and rates them 1/10 and tells why. thanks.

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Answer 1

wow you definitely have some skils!

fly like me was my favorite

Answer 2

You may have skills but you can always improve.

song 1: The "fly like me" part can get catchy which is really good because people will remember that. Your lyrics can improve in some areas but it really doesn't matter about the verses aslong as the hook or chorus in your case "Fly like me" part is visible in the song. That's what catches the audience.

7/10. Sometimes when your rapping it's off with the instrumental and you carry the word longer. And your lyrics can improve. Other then that it's a good song.


song 2: This is the type of tune you bump in you car on full blast. The instrumental is really nice. Lyrics better then the first song. Like I said before, the verses don't really matter but you got some nice lyrics in your verses. The hook is nice too. I think it's funny how your 14 and acting like your a grown man but since the beginning of time little kids in the biz have been doing that so it's all good. The only thing I would say about this is sometimes for me it sounded like you really weren't trying to rap, like give all your energy. I don't know what your using to record, maybe that's why you sound kinda died sometimes but thats the only thing that I didn't like. It needs more energy in some parts other then that it fine.

9/10

Song 3: I tried to write a rap to this but I couldn't get the jest of it. It is a cover song but you did a good job. Lyrically not as good as Bow Wow's but you did good. For me there are too many over voices. You only need a few ever one or two lines. Not every other word. and make sure they over lap each other because they were a little off.

7/10

My fav was def the tune "It's all good". The instrumental is nice and your lyrics were mostly on point.

Since your songs are like East coast/ West coast like, in todays music world it's all about the south so it's going to be hard to break into the business right now. Get your name out first like on soundclick.com, imeem.com, mixtapes, sell cds out your friends car cause you can't drive legally yet, etc.. Good luck. I hope I helped.

Answer 3

Ok
You need to pick up the beats, I almost feel asleep listening to them. The second song was better than the other two. Your stuff sound a lot more like a R&B, than rap. You flow well for being 14 though.
6/10

Answer 4

Ok so here goes, the first song, I Need You, I was really into, sounded good, pretty professional, definitely the right choice to choose as the default. For me, the other two just weren't on the same level as that one. Nothing to Lose has potential but for some reason sounded a little rough to me, like its unmastered or needs to be remastered. The song She, to be brutally honest, got on my nerves. Whoever that was doin the high pitched...whatever in the back really distracted me from the rest of the song, and quickly got on my nerves so much that I had to click away..Sorry. But anyways, you definitely have potential if the first song has anything to say about you guys.

Answer 5

yo man, postin ish twice? keep you pride dude. rap is all about pride, here is my previous answer,

honestly fomr one mc to another, you needa make your own sound, your own style. dude it's good to have insperations but dont copy them. Influences come from all over, from movies, mc's, fighters, polititians. music is life, you dont wanna make the same life that someone has in their cd case 100 times already. I dont give two damns about points, and i dont give two damns about exposure. You gotta be real with your self and others, F- the image, F-the gangstas, be you. I'm 25 and and a hip hopper.

1st song sounds(flylike me) ... played out dude, I heard it a million times, i dont mean to be an asss , i hurts pride, i know. its gotta good beat, but you need more, read some books. dont talk about the same ish everyone else does.

it's all good sounds kinda wack dude.

and its just me but i hate love songs. ish is weak dude.

now that we got past that. your a good rapper, you have good rhyme schemes. you just need to read, read, and learn a vocabulary, more metaphores, take a writing class. you are a good rapper, your only 14, you have time to grow. do some digging, find some new artists. keep it up though, dont stop, but grow and learn, oh, that g rap, is not going to be around much longer, its getting boring, you have to be ahead of the crowd, not following. keep it up, learn. practice

4/10 sorry

Answer 6

right for song one that is some very good beat and lyrics man you could be one of the best all you need to do is get a few crew members and rap a bit faster other than that its all good. for song two you done very good there man you are one in a million you could make a big name for yourself in the music industry. plus if you make some more songs then you could really release a sucesful mixtape witch would bring in the dollar. for song three it is very good. overall in my opinion you are very good and could be a rapper if you put your mind to it.

Answer 7

I have to admit, you got some skills. Try to vary youre style, them songs kinda sound the same. That doesnt mean there bad, there not, there good XD but mabye varying youre rhythm/style could improve some of youre songs. Just a thought man.
keep chasing youre dream....you will get there one day

Answer 8

Fly like me seems like an Original kinda of thing you would want to stick with. It can be your signature. I think you will be good as an R&B artist than a Rapper.

Answer 9

oh fly like me is hot you can dance in a club ill give that a 10 and your voice is sexy and ill defiantly by you album and it's all good is a cute song speacial the beat ill give that a 9 and let me hold you remix it's good but its not as good as bowow so ill give that a 8 my fav is it's a good
go get you a record deal email me

Answer 10

im not gonna lie i think you got some pretty good beats!! but the way you flow or rap whatever you call it, it sounds kinds like your holding back. man you gotta sound confident when you rappin but dont over do it!! but other than that i think its pretty tight i really do. at first i thought it was gonna be some lame *** ****!! but when i heard it i underestimated you!! its good my fave one is the second one you sound more sure of yourself in that one!!keep it up and good luck to you!

Answer 11

I heard fly like me and it was okay except for the explicit parts