So were here
Staring at eachother
Remembering when
We weren't looking for a rebuttle
I can't believe you did that
I haven't been so sad
Crying day and night
You took my family away
You took yourself away
I can't stop saying that
She really wasn't worth it
To push me and Mike away
To push my mommy away
To push your brother away
Who do you think you are
So now I'm done
You are finally erased
Deleted
Gone
Forever
I hope you're happy now
2007-05-10 12:23:58 · 7 answers · asked by !~CoNvErSe~! 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it. The poem is heartfelt.
2007-05-10 12:26:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it, but it could be better. I think there is a better way of presenting it. I don't like putting specific names in poems...but that is just my personal preference. I loved the beginning, the middle could be better, and the ending I don't like.
2007-05-12 19:08:40 · answer #2 · answered by User 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
two thumbs up I like it
2007-05-12 12:00:45 · answer #3 · answered by coolio 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i can accually feel your emotion...is sad yet full of anger...i love the end, how you finally get over it...i honestly think its nice
2007-05-10 19:30:52 · answer #4 · answered by Jew_Juice 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it . sad and heart breaking
2007-05-10 19:39:52 · answer #5 · answered by StarShine G 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd give it a 3/10.
2007-05-10 19:28:18 · answer #6 · answered by live laugh love 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
honestly?
a little generic
a little bland
a little angsty,
but it has a nice twist to it
2007-05-10 19:28:41 · answer #7 · answered by blackcat3556 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋