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It is hoped that several new conducive policies such as bigger contractor share, the provision of exploration incentives for the difficult oil fields and state-of-the-art technology application will contribute significantly to the production increase.
*However*, it is projected to lower the share of oil in Indonesia energy mix, in 2025 oil will account for 20% of Indonesia’s energy, by transferring its significant part to gas and coal.
2007-05-10 03:16:00 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
It's fine, but you should put a full stop (period) after "energy mix" and make "In 2025..." the start of a new sentence.
2007-05-10 03:27:24 · answer #1 · answered by rrabbit 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is hoped that several new conducive policies such as larger contractor shares, exploration incentives, and state-of-the-art technologies will contribute significantly to production increases across the board.
However, projections show that by 2025, the use of oil will l gradually erode to 20% of Indonesia's energy sources as transference is made to gas and coal.
2007-05-10 10:34:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"however" is not the problem. The problem arises out of the passive voice constructions. As a consequence "it" after however is unclear.
2007-05-10 11:09:40 · answer #3 · answered by CanProf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
However is perfectly fine. However, your real problem is the commas. Get rid of all of them.
2007-05-10 12:23:20 · answer #4 · answered by Sptfyr 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
However is never a conjunction and certainly not in this case
2007-05-10 10:39:07 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"It is projected, however, etc." would be preferable.
2007-05-10 10:23:49 · answer #6 · answered by allon e 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋