So the country's energy position is unique. Besides being an energy consumer, it also produces energy which still makes it positive in fossil fuel balance. Furthermore, the country still has oil and gas resources to develop.
2007-05-10 03:39:15
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answered by amanda 3
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So, the country's energy position is unique. Besides being an energy consumer, the country also produces energy which makes its fuel balance more efficient. Furthermore, the country has oil and gas resources to develop energy.
Note: I am not an English teacher. There are several ways of describing the same thing. Usually, the sentences are not structured properly (this is what you mean by grammatical error) and do not reflect what the writer is trying to say.
2007-05-10 10:24:09
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answered by cidyah 7
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It doesn't sound quite right to me somehow. Instead of telling you what to correct, here's how I'd write it:
So the country's energy position is unique. Besides being an energy consumer, it also produces energy which still makes it positive in fossil fuel balance. Furthermore, the country still has oil and gas resources to develop.
Hope this helps.
2007-05-10 10:11:25
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answered by abdiver12 5
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So, the country's energy position is unique. As an energy consumer, it is also producing energy which allows it to maintain a positive fossil fuel balance. Furthermore, the country still has oil and gas resources to develop.
2007-05-10 10:11:24
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answered by stn1225 6
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Actually it's not that bad. "So" needs to go. "the country energy position is unique" is a full sentence. However, "country" needs to take the possessive and become "country's". "Besides" begins a prepositional phrase and a comma must follow. The second comma after "consumer" is correct
The country's energy position is unique. Besides, as an energy consumer, it is also producing energy which makes it still positive in fuel balance. Furthermore, the country still has oil and gas resources to develope.
2007-05-10 12:39:49
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answered by Sptfyr 7
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So, the country's energy position is unique. Aside from being a major energy consumer, the country produces energy making it still positive in fossil fuel balance.
Furthermore, the country still has oil and gas resources to develop.
2007-05-10 10:13:57
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answered by joe_on_drums 6
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I am assuming this is the point you wish to make:
The country's energy position is unique as an energy consumer because it also produces energy contributing to a positive fossil fuel balance.
Furthermore, the country still has oil and gas resources to develop.
2007-05-10 10:13:37
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answered by ? 6
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Its really badly constructed. The reader is left to read it several times to get exactly what you are saying. Try reconstructing the sentence, using shorter sentences, adjusting your syntax, and making use of other types of punctuation, such as the semicolon.
2007-05-10 10:12:48
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answered by Anonymous
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