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We have witnessed that cooperation between ABC and the ATO continues to expand. It has brought more collaboration between the two international organizations, in tackling issues related to global energy, and petroleum in particular. One would recognize the strategic nature of such cooperation, since ABC and ATO each represents major world oil producers and consumers, respectively.
2007-05-10 02:31:26 · 6 answers · asked by Ron 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
We have witnessed that the cooperation between ABC and ATO continues to expand. This cooperation has lead to increased collaboration between the two international organizations in tackling issues related to global energy with particular emphasis on petroleum. It has been recognized that this strategic cooperation is beneficial to both of these major oil producers as well as consumers worldwide.
2007-05-10 03:42:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Four commas is no big issue. I could find no grammatical errors, so I inserted it into Microsoft Word, which could find none as well. I even checked it under "Technical," "Formal," etc... all the options for grammatical and spell checking. Good job.
2007-05-10 02:42:03 · answer #2 · answered by Kristin D 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
For the way the sentences are written, Alowishus B is correct.
2007-05-10 03:57:14 · answer #3 · answered by Michael 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Remove the commas after "organisations" and "petroleum."
The rest is fine, although you may want to play with your word order for clarity.
2007-05-10 02:39:57 · answer #4 · answered by Alowishus B 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Get rid of the commas.
2007-05-10 02:49:35 · answer #5 · answered by Sptfyr 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Too many commas.
2007-05-10 02:38:16 · answer #6 · answered by sillycanuckpei 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋