Let my life be a dance
Gently through the edges of time
Bowing and bending
To that which is Sublime.
Lightly stepping only
Gently to the beat.
Feeling only and knowing.
All will be complete.
2007-05-08 06:38:23 · 12 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
No life is wasted unless we refuse to live it.
2007-05-08 06:49:44 · update #1
Hello Debra,
This poem is short and sweet. It sounds like it comes from the heart--but there also seems to be a deeper meaning.
Something in the poem says "there's more, but I can't tell you"
and piques my interest, making me want to know more.
It's a good poem--if it's yours, keep on writing, OK??
2007-05-08 06:51:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It doesn't necessarily have to rhyme but it needs to hit my emotions. I think clarity of expression is important as well. I don't like to second guess what I'm reading about. I always look for what I term "poetic gems"in the text.
2016-05-18 02:46:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds more like a song or a chant, the rhythm is very strong. I like it. It also has a good meaning; it reminds me of the parable of the willow and the oak.
2007-05-08 06:54:43 · answer #3 · answered by Shinkirou Hasukage 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My life has always been a struggle and never a dance. I don't think that will ever change.
It is a beautiful poem. If you have a life like that you are blessed.
2007-05-08 06:47:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Gives me a feeling of a life which just wants to flow with the tide and do nothing else......A precious life wasted..........sorry.
2007-05-08 06:48:33 · answer #5 · answered by P'quaint! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Who's it addressed to?
And what are 'the edges of time'?
CD
2007-05-08 06:47:16 · answer #6 · answered by Super Atheist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is not at all poetic,boring.I see your friend pangel in disguise likes it.The biggest problem on this site friends backing friends
2007-05-08 06:50:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Quite peaceful. I dont really see what it is about hough.
2007-05-08 06:44:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
still got it Deb !
so lovely to see you writing again , very lovely xx
2007-05-08 06:46:37 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
Very nice.
Is that yours?
2007-05-08 06:44:01 · answer #10 · answered by Samurai Jack 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋