I wrote it for my friends son that is in the hospital.
You taught me how to love and laugh,each time you made me smile.
You showed me where to find my tears,hadn't cried for awhile.
Each chance I get to see you,my soul it shouts with joy.
Gus, a man of respect,not a little boy.
I love to watch your mother read,to you a book you like.
The both of you togethers love,still lingers throughout the night.
I still miss the days I helped you out,if I had the chance I'd do it again.
Not because of your situation,because I love you and you my friend.
Each day I think about you,even the whatevers you tell me and say.
Each time your voice would speak those words,in your sarcastic little way.
These words I could speak to anybody,to many each line would not be true.
But I had to give them like this,Because I could not say these words to you.
So as I end my little rhyme,written with love and truth.
You took a man with anger and hate,and reunited him with his youth.
2007-04-30 20:48:10 · 7 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
No I made him a rose inside a box that I made.It is the first repleca of my rhyme and a rose valetine idea.That I will produce someday.You have to know this kid to understand he is dying of spinal muscular distraphy.
2007-04-30 20:59:42 · update #1
you know you people are sick some of you people.If you have thoughts like that your probably a molester.
2007-04-30 21:01:24 · update #2
Actually, this's for your lover or friend's son or your friend? The line 6 & 7 are okay for your friend's son. But the rest of it sounds like you are talking your lover.
2007-04-30 23:09:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If he is your friend's son, I would think that it would be more appropriate to give him a card and a gift. I got the impression that you were a bit too involved.
2007-05-01 03:55:14 · answer #2 · answered by PEGGY S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it would be better to give 2 ur wife or gf.cos its a little much for ur friends son.he might think ur hitting on him
2007-05-01 03:59:31 · answer #3 · answered by hellion_7 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
fantastic very warm hearted.
2007-05-01 03:53:12 · answer #4 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
maybe he will think hes getting lucky!
2007-05-01 03:56:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey!! thats so awesome
2007-05-01 03:52:55 · answer #6 · answered by sure 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is touching..
2007-05-01 03:57:26 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋